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AGE: 22
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
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Poetry / Absoloute Hate.
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How do i start I'l give it a go And call you a tart Then soon you'll know It was never ment to be It was all in your head So now you shall see Our friendship is dead I'l explain it on bold Its because of our past Our future is cold You always put me last So thats what im told It happened so fast Now my life has been sold So please i beg and i ask Please let me be Its not much of a task Then soon you will see That i was put last When u cheated on me!  
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Poetry / Loves Detour
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
The feeling of trust The knowledge of pain Leave it u must Or ul have nothing to gain. The thoughts in your head Are road blocks youl see I know the words have been said But u have nothing to flee Dont push her away. There the most important words Youl hear anyone say Your unlike a bird I can see it in your eyes Theres nothing worth hiding Put away the disguise Instead start replying. Tell her how u feel Give in and let go Just admit that its real And give her a show.  
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4 Reviews   1 Comment
Your my light in the dark, The reason i breathe Your the beat of my heart The one that i seathe I dont need to know how I just want u to see Its you and its now Its the reason im me Its not even a game Il give you a clue Its starts with your name And its kinda like glue Yes is the love that we share The feeling and trust It proves that i care Its nothing like lust So this is where we stand As equal and one A woman and man Im not in it for fun Now im yours and im taken Im no longer free Theres...
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8 Reviews   1 Comment
I’m your key for your lock. Then why doesn’t it turn? I’m your bread for your toaster. Then why does it burn? I’m your change for your vending machine. Then why does it jam? I’m the path that u walk. Then why don’t u stand? I’m the air that you breathe. Then why do u sneeze? I’m the beat of your heart. But why the disease? Im the Tears that u cry. Then why do u wipe them away? I’m your light in the dark. Then why push me astray? Its becau...
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Poetry / I AM LOVE
its almost not possible to fault this piece. the only thing i was a little unhappy about was how ur last verse. the first and third lines ended in perfect poetry and made so much cents yet none of the other versus did. its a shame. but still very good.
Poetry / Windmills
not bad. noticed 1 spelling mistake in the begining being strait. i believe its spelt straight. overall a well put together piece.
Poetry / Choices
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Poetry / One Way Street
i guess. it was good in the sense of the poetry but i realy dont personally like the way the versus are put together. or maybe its that u need some more to help the reader understand the poem more. so maybe a few more lines. it just doesnt really reach out.
Poetry / FEAR
its excellent, though theres simply not enough to it and it may look better if was was formatted with each line under the one before. but if this was just the start, i think it should be good with a few more verses.
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