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AGE: 37
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 11

34 Year Old Australian Male.
Resides in Queensland.
Interests include reading, cooking, blogging, music and indiginous Art. Travel.
I have the Number One Blog (‘Confession) on ICON – (madonna.com) Madonna’s Official Fansite. Whereas I don’t claim to be Her most dedicated Fan, I enjoy contributing many and varied articles and give true credit where due.
Love going to the Movies – recent favourites include ‘Pan’s Labyrinth’, ‘Volver’ and ‘The Queen’.
Big Fan of schlocky Horror Films.
Have been shaped by many Life events, especially in losing both My Parents as a Young Child, in fairly tragic circumstances.
Thanks for reading, Dave.

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M., strange times are upon us! Yesterday, I received a UPS envelope that contained a $3000 (USD) check from an organiztion in Philadelphia (from what I could tell)! I was instructed to pocket a generous portion of it and send the balance to an orphanage in Ohio! What the!? It all seems above board with addresses and bank details; (I Googled!) Ain't life grand! So, with a few more 'lovely numbers' such as this, you and I shall be jetting off to the Maldives for a 'recovery holiday'! (Rec...

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'ello, 'ello! What the devil am I getting at!? Hmmmmm.......... I feel sad when I hear angry tales from U.S. citizens about their country; the repression and lack of essential services etc. Michael Moore is a two-edged sword; his genius clarifies and crucifies at the same time! It has always been the way that the biggest stars of them all will get the harshest treatment and the most unforgiving judgements. Is it karma!? (What would I know - just a 'dumb cowboy' from the outback etc). But let'...

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The four stages, Reflecting those ages Of man ... and his minions, 'neath trapdoors descending Past mirror balls powdery lighting .. to endings, The dreamlike mystical psycho paths bending, Where lavender scented souls attempt mendings, At last! Sunshine!... summer dazed! Cool splashings of sand-spattered, beach-castling duels, Smelling barbecued feasts inside zinc lobstered fools.. The Sun Goddess' zenith, the sparkling of jewels, Horizons of shimmering scorched parching pools, ...still desc...

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Ah, sweet vetiver ... Curling 'neath my nose as smoke gyres, But the moment is lost, Amidst the screeching of another half of rugby goals, And gaudy hues of handmade-stitching drunks, Awash with sauce art, spiced tomato brushstrokes .. Cubist masterpieces by Heinz, Those same angles framing powdered pastry scowls, And priggish noses; bloody Aussie royalty mate! That sweet scent of stolen luxuries, devoured! By sweats and Brut and past fashionable eyeliner shades. Trampled 'neath the malted br...

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Floating on dreamlike mists of haunted love Angelic tomes atop cherubic doves But hark, if thy knights of passions die And beauty stalls and takes an oath to fly Unto another realm where spirits be.. A love so pure that time shall heed And Camelot whence shall the troops return To spy a pyre atop his frame doth burn I kneel before a princess purest fair And quote my love that kingdoms will despair Corpus Christ, reach to grasp the grail Oh holiest of one, shall witness my travail

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by Durian

First thought, 'What the Hell is a chupacabra?' But seriously I simply loved Your poem! Insight and clarity combine with generous lashings of cynical humour. The omission of punctuation was a stroke of Genius I felt as it freed up the subject matter and gave Your work an unfettered freshness! Your economy speaks volumes too! Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to reading more! Dave.

by StutheRabbit

I like the ending that you have and I really love your piece! Moody and magical! The references to bygone days and stars (Judy Garland, Ingrid Bergman) heightened the effect I thought. Excellent! Thanks

by Lisa_M

I want to say how delighted I was to read a piece that incorporates so much sensual experience. So many written creations that One looks at only seem to focus on a visual aspect, yet in the opening strains I was smelling and feeling and hearing. Such a richer palette employed than many and for that point alone I scored You highly. The narrative is gripping, I enjoyed Your Historical references and was impressed with the themes employed. 'Azure Sees' is strong and interesting and I applaud You...

by Mohr_i_Ghan

Wow! I love the way that you stuctured your poem; a bit chaotic and jumbled like a spring snow storm is. I think that the imagery that you employ is colorful and effective and very well described. A good use of sensual language in the piece heightens your descriptive verse and I wonder if you could have incorporated a little more to give an overall rounded referencing of all 5 senses and hence expand the piece's impact. Thanks, I enjoyed reading it! D.

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