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AGE:
25
LOC: Jacksonville, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 17
LOC: Jacksonville, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 17
I write prose poetry, and am very interested in politics as well. I have actually started my own political party that has not really made it off the ground yet. The website for my political party is www.myspace.com/pcrmovement
I enjoy playing call of duty 4 on xbox360 and listen to a lot of heavy metal music. I was also formally in a Hardcore/Metal band that has disbanded named Beneath the Living
My xbox s/n is: ButchCassidy111
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The Hidden Foothills The Mountains bloom with new life, inhaling its breath taking views, the mountain exhales a layer of smoke. Deep and dark is its reach, though the crisp clean air brings you in for a drink. Soft pink, purple, and magentas fill it's background with manifesto, buried in this landscape lives the paintbrush of God. As long summer days end, the trees spark a new beginning, the colors of fireworks dance in their branches, while the wind toils to take them to new heights. Soon t...
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I. The Commencement: Contradictions and Deceits The Blood Splatter explodes new excitement into a lifeless corpse; as the junkie sits in his remorse, hiding from reality in which he conceals, not very well at all. My walls are full of child hood drawings, or have I just taken a crayon to my walls? Do not be afraid the Schizophrenic angel tells me, but I’m starting not to believe him at all; for when I begin down the hall the angel follows me, claws and all. A blaze of colors blinding me sendi...
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Hung by the weeping willow my soul sets as the sun rises, burning my eyes from the socket, drifting into nothing, sifting through cotton like clouds they gently touch my face. Dreaming of old memories that have been forgotten, memories of past begotten, filthy priest souls burn rotten, death sprouts flowers of hope’s destruction. Pulled from the fire without end, tossed into the lake of desirable trend, beaten to death without benevolence, buried shallow in misery. Hung by the weeping willow ...
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Sounds clashing the planes crashing, startling my slumbering eyes from sleep. The crowd thrashing the oppressor laughing as we are violently abused and beat. These are the times in which I live, where heaven’s fallen angles commit much sin, buried in the hills of Mount Zion, the creatures toil and fight without end. Merely, Merely I say unto you, thou that drinketh from this cup shall never again thirst, thirst for your own thoughts and free verse, for that shall be considered cursed. You wil...
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Your open hands of grace shower me with poison, until I stop breathing. Starving for Life, the weight of these bones is all that is left of me. A rotting corpse that is still alive already decomposed from your lack of sympathy. We all breathe the same air, and drink the same cup, and eat the same bread. Why must I be tortured with these plagues? What have I done that you have not done? What makes me more of a savage then you? Nothing. Deep in the heart of every man lies either an angry beast ...
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The words do not really flow, either do some of the words belong together. I would really consider re-writing this piece. It's not a bad subject, because you obviously love your pet, it's just the way this piece is worded that jumbles the clarity of this piece.
Good Stuff as always man!!....There is only one stanza I would consider changing-- "Some people say, That I have a problem. I do. A limited supply, Sure is a problem to me." Doesn't sound like it flows..But besides that I see nothing else! Great Poem!
Nicely written, there is not much to critique though I do have a question on what is meant by one of your stanzas... "Our teachers seen in glory, Us puppets stringed to stories, Of lessons immoral but obligated , Nothings familiar – yet we feel hatred." Are you saying that we should not be taught our American history?? Of life before and up to the civil war??
This poem seem to repeat the same statement over and over again, though it is not a poorly written piece, I as a reader would like to have more to chew on, if you get what I am saying.
Very good imagery and choice of words....I really liked this one, my favorite part has to be this line-- "strutting down toll roads as impatient as a hotel faucet’s dripping."
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