Your story kept me tuned in to every detail. It sure would make an outstanding picture. I like the size difference between Judas and Shannon. You made Shannon sound like she was a queen bee. Let's hope that little Jr is born a peach colored person like Jadas and surely not the last artist on the planet.

When I really think about it, God has really been good to let you write these emotional lyrics. I like the way that you make it clear that you see what God has done for you no matter about the unpleasant things that happened in your life. I like it as a church song.

First of all I must say, I will buy your book when it comes out. Your book grabbed my attention and kept me interested the whole 2327 words. You gave some good advice when you said that we all know someone who is fatter, shorter, less intelligent that has more friends than you or I. That is really true. I also like the fact that your book could be used as a reference book on my desperate journey towards wealth and independence. To be able to make something out of almost nothing takes great sk...

Your story is good and catchy. Too bad that it's not finished yet. I would like to know what Kel's father and her uncle Edan is mutating to. What is Kel doing on the stone wall?

You really have a great imagination to write like this. Your words paint a very abstract picture of criticism. Well! chances are that changes will be like holidays in my book too. But like you said, "personal virtue is easier to repeat." I like the way you used the watermarks its clever.

Wow! It makes me sad to read your poetry. I feel so sad for your pen and paper to witness such sad thoughts that come from your mind. Your words were heart breaking to a happy soul but it was very interesting to see that you have enough talent to bring out those words that you did. Well I know that you wrote it some time ago but I really hope you have chilled up since then. Great work though very sad.

I like the story of H'Gan and his missing Creature. I would like to read on to find out what really happened to the creature and if it was ever found. Some things is the story was not too clear like the creature tried to kill him once or twice before, why whould he let his creepy creature Familiar prepare his food.

Very interesting to read poetry about what's going on now in the war. You made it sound so real if though you were there. Were you there at the Iraq war or is this all made up from your mind? I know you said you did not share their sacrifice or fears. I like your encouraging words when you said speak the truth and fight new battles, and not quit.