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AGE: 100
LOC: Canada
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 23

I am just a small (ish) town girl, with big hopes and dreams. I hoped to go to Med School, to become a plastic surgeon, but realized I would probably not measure up. I feel I may have settled for less, but my life is not over yet and I will live as well as I can!
I’ve gone through quite a lot in the past years, and had given up everything that mattered to me: learning, writing, drawing, friends, life. I am now beginning to write again and am in love.
Things I like: Art, writing, books, learning, medical information, puma clothing brand, chicken, Volkswagen, jeans, fashion design, architecture, life, curling, skiing, alone time, deep red, romance, mystery, humour, ... and on and on and on!!!!
I often have impulses to take over the wor…

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Poetry / Someday
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
Your picture by my bed; last thing I see when I lay down my head, Your voice in my mind; the last thing I hear before my eyes go blind. Your love so deep; the last thing I feel before I fall asleep. When I sleep, I feel you too. I feel your love, your touch. I look forward for that day when it is not a photo that I see, but you. lying next to me.
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Poetry / The one who keeps me
Version 1
5 Reviews   0 Comments
You are the one i want, the one i need; the one who keeps me in check, keeps my mind from running in circles and the one who keeps me just a little insane.
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Quotes / This love.
Version 1
13 Reviews   8 Comments
I know I also should not love you like this, but oh, such a love, I could not bear to live without.
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Shadow of the Smile
Version 2
12 Reviews   6 Comments
Prologue    The alleyway was just dark enough to cover us in a shroud of black while still giving me vision. The cobblestone was cold against my knees and the breeze brought a stale smell to my nose. His head rolled in my arm, blood still dripping from his delicate neck. Stroking his golden brown hair, my fingers trembled. His blood was hot and sticky but to me it felt like silk; beautiful and seductive.     His eyes were shut, thank God, so I did not have to stare in...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Shadow of the Smile
Version 1
6 Reviews   1 Comment
The alleyway was just dark enough to cover us in a shroud of black while still giving me vision. The cobblestone was cold against my knees and the breeze brought a stale smell to my nose. His head rolled in my arm, blood still dripping from his delicate neck. Stroking his golden brown hair, my fingers trembled. His blood was hot and sticky but to me it felt like silk; beautiful and seductive. Not wanting to leave, I stood up and took one last look at him, before turning my back. I’d ju...
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Haiku/Senryu / It's not the artist
by Alex_Bruinekool
I like this piece :) I do agree with this, though I also believe that the artist has a large hand in what his art means. But as you have stated, what the art means really depends on who is viewing it at the specific time! Well done
Limericks / Obama Limerick (August 5, 2009)
by obamafu
Once again, your form is done very well and it flows excellently. As you said in the notes area, I am not sure about the content, but am happy you 'bleeped' it out. Good job, I think that you have well established yourself with your opinions, whether or not others agree with them.
Young Adult / The North Pole Challenge Chapter 2: Snowball Massacre
by FleaTheElf
Flea looked around and noticed that steam came out of everyone’s mouth but he wasn’t nearly as bothered by the cold air. I do not know about this sentence, mainly because seeing one's breath is not really a complete showcase of disliking the cold, but a reaction when our breath hits the cold air. Perhaps if you mention their breath, but also that they are shivering? Other than that... I once again thought it was really good :) We can definitly tell woodworking and snow is his element. I think...
Young Adult / The North Pole Challenge - Chapter 1 - Dodgeball Dodged
by FleaTheElf
I thought this was written well. 'would be particularly brutal now that he had a bulls-eye on his back' I really enjoyed that part too. I found it interesting how you made him a prodigy at woodworking, and found it is a nice change, possibly showing people there is more than sports, music, etc. that you can be great at. "Flea understood exactly what he was looking at though he’d never seen a blueprint in his life" Maybe it should read 'looking at, EVEN though he'd never' - just a suggestion, ...
Poetry / Ninja Cuddle
by Niansahc
I actually liked this quite a bit. I found the title to be amusing and fitting, and the poem to be short but very descriptive. This was something that didn't need a bunch of flowery wording, and you nailed it. Well done!
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