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AGE:
33
LOC: Wilmington, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 22
LOC: Wilmington, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 22
“Don’t talk to me like a child. I played Hamlet, at Cambridge.”
I have a bachelors degree in Literature and Writing. I enjoy writing short stories, stream of consciousness poetry, songs, and playing my acoustic gee-tar.
Favorite writer, Kurt Vonnegut-”Deadeye Dick”
Favorite poet-William Stafford “Traveling Through the Dark”, Favorite musical artist, The Beatles-”Rubber Soul, Revolver, Sgt. Pepper, Magical Mystery Tour, The White Album, Abbey Road, Get Back”
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Grew out my ass hair Took a shit in the park Hid in the bushes Crept around in the dark Wore size twenty-two sneakers While studying the habits of Sasquatch
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Last night as I was pulling ward duty with the babies, I noticed an odd sensation. It was about 3:57 a.m., and I seem to recall hovering lucidly with a half empty bottle over 3 month old Haley's crib. It was then that I realized that the tune to "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" and "Baa Baa Black Sheep" is one and the same. The sensation hit me a succession of times, but none more profoundly than when the music box of the baby mobile tinkled to a halt. Maybe it was because I was so tired. You'd ...
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successful diet pills and smoking cigarettes how her poor heart aches
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Knot for climbing Not for climbing Naught for climbing Sir Edmund Hillary fucked it up for me
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I don’t think anyone would want what I’ve been smoking Can’t even answer the phone without thinking it's bad news Or mom asking for the thousandth time “Is something wrong?” Yes, for crying out loud Yes, something is wrong I need a vacation from this guilt trip I’ve been on All the things I should have said or done roar in my head One in particular comes to mind I should have called her like I promised eight years ago Maybe, she wouldn’t have got in that car Maybe her head wouldn’t have been ...
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Good piece. I like the different "walking" follow-up, but I don't like the title. I like the idea of "Walking to Walk," but I don't like the way it sounds or looks as the title. Too clunky or not original enough, maybe.
It sure does speak for itself, ya smartass! Made me smile. Good job.
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Good writing. I think the title is an eye catcher, but it led me in a different direction than I'd expected it to. To me, the expression "Feeling like putty" sounded somewhat adolescent in nature and gave me an impression that this piece would go in a slightly lighter and/or more whimsical direction than it did, like the term "Silly Putty" might indicate. Obviously, I was wrong, but I liked the direction it went. It seemed to be evocative and sensual while still managing to remain tastefully ...
Pretty disturbing pictures painted in my head, especially the "entrails/barber shop bit, reminded me a bit of the Tool "Sober" music video. The narrator's voice seemed genuinely tortured, full of anguish, which reminded me a bit of the vibe I get when reading Edgar Allen Poe, or Joseph Conrad's Kurtz from "Heart of Darkness" (or watching a Tool music video.) I would have liked to have heard these 3 distinct voices blended together rather than apart, so that maybe the tone wouldn't quiver as m...
It is a bit cheesy, but amusing in a poignant "Cry Out For the Arts," sort of way. Not bad.
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