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Chapter 2: Escape (July 17th 2007. Poughkeepsie, NY 14 Months after the Chicago murders) Once again Janet found herself hitting the hard pavement and for a moment breathing eluded her. Several defining explosions rocked the pavement underneath of her as section by section the building behind her spewed out debris in every direction. Finally Janet inhaled sharply followed by coughing from the thick smoke in the air. The almost paralyzing pain in her ribs made it even more difficult for her to ...
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Verse 1: The clouds were black, Day turned to night The rumbling of the thunder, the valley was a sight I knew a battle was near... The two armies, began to rise up They stood fact to face, the good and the corrupt The time has come, the time has come... Chorus: There's a battle in the valley so turn and fight, Before you loose your own life... Verse 2: The armies marched forward, weapons held high The air filled, with battle cries The end has come... The clashing of the armies, filled the sk...
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Chapter 1: Nightclub Nick slipped two one hundred dollar bills into the doorman’s hand as he cautiously entered the nightclub. The crowd was in full party mode. The large crowd of men and women engaging each other rhythmically on the dance floor along with the thumping bass from the live band made it difficult for Nick to concentrate. Purposefully he adjusted his $3000 suit and took a deep breath to calm himself. All his clothes felt tight around his broad shoulders and he cursed under his br...
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Nick slipped two one hundred dollar bills into the doorman’s hand as he cautiously entered the nightclub. The crowd was in full party mode. He couldn’t help but notice the large crowd of men and women engaging each other rhythmically on the dance floor as he endured the pain in his ears caused by the thumping bass coming from the live band up on stage. Purposefully he adjusted his Armani suit and took a deep breath to calm himself. He was meeting someone tonight and he knew how important it w...
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“This is Journeyman-8 log entry day 92.” I sat back in my seat and tried to relax. “It has now been over three months that I have been alone in this shuttle and I have traveled nearly 200 years into the future. For the first time in man’s history the speed of light has been broken and from what the readings on my control panel are telling me I should be able to see Earth in a matter of minutes. If this goes as planned I should be able to take the readings I need from Earth’s orbit and begin m...
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I was seventeen and on my way up a hill with three of my best friends. I had always been the token fat boy of the group but they didn’t seem to mind. We had decided to take a Friday off of school and go to a water park in northern Jersey for the day. The Hill was called ‘Surf Hill’ and I will never forget it as long as I live. The four of us trekked up the hill as we watched several predecessors slide down the hill happily and with great big smiles on their faces. It looked like a lot of fun ...
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Nick slipped two one hundred dollar bills into the doorman’s hand as he cautiously entered the nightclub. The crowd was in full party mode. He couldn’t help but notice the large crowd of men and women engaging each other rhythmically on the dance floor as he endured the pain in his ears caused by the thumping bass coming from the live band up on stage. Purposefully he adjusted his Armani suit and took a deep breath to calm himself. He was meeting someone tonight and he knew how important it w...
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