Elf's profile

Elf avatar
AGE: 20
LOC: Canada
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 24

   I´m quite amiture, and I have horrible spelling. My strangth is in storry telling, but i mostly write poetry becuse short passonet spurts of insperation and feeling ridle my mind.

   My dream is to be great inspite of short comings…

Show +
Item Stats
Show [+]
Reviewer Stats
Items
Non-fiction / 6 word memoir: 2
Version 1
6 Reviews   3 Comments
Writing, the eternal campaign till death.
Ratings & Rankings
 Plus-button Clarity
Opportunities
Non-fiction / six-word memoir: 1
Version 1
7 Reviews   3 Comments
Born creative but struggling to fly.
Ratings & Rankings
 Plus-button Clarity
Opportunities
Poetry / Renewed
Version 1
2 Reviews   1 Comment
In blessed rest now lay your head. No more to dwell on thoughts of dread. In shades of peace your wounds will heal. let calmness rain, no pain to feel. Do not fear death with it's mystery. It wipes us clean of hurts history. It chills like snow, but leaves us clean Burns with the flame to keep us green. Its hand can reach, here, then no more. It must let go once threw the door. And now your free from all life's taints. So hush vain tears, leave these restraints. Beyond the void you'll find yo...
Ratings & Rankings
 Plus-button Clarity
Poetry / Life's Last Door
Version 2
17 Reviews   3 Comments
From earth flown To spirit home The light to don Like wing so strong Forever more Through stars to soar Forget before The weight you bore To haven above With all our love We, left behind The reason will find So fly away Forget today Be free, and more Through life's last door
Ratings & Rankings
[ View all items ]
Reviews
Short Story / Dearest Dick
by oknapp
"For instance, she felt that she had a healthy sense of hu... In essence, she felt that he was defini... For instance, she sometimes just blurted things out, w..." WOW there...unless for some reason you started the 3 sentences EXACTLY the same on purpose...it REALLY needs to be changed. So much repetitive material is only acceptable when making a point...and I don't see one here. (If there is a point to be made, made try to make it more clear.) Haha...I love the Latin bit. Great ending, I was...
Non-fiction / Six Words from a Democrat
by Fenvy
eh...I get it but with out the title for it no one would...
Humor/Satire / A Writer's Life in Six Words
by DCAllen
At first I didn't get it, but after reading it several times it clicked in. I find this vary clever, and vary true. Really good job at originality!!
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Six Small Words
by ashkrafton
Well it is definitely true on a global scale for writers, and it read well. But...it sounds allot like what every one els is saying. It doesn't detract from its meaning, but its not something that is going to stay with me for long. I apresheate it while I read it, and then it slips threw my subconscious and disappears. So good...but not great.
Short Story / Six Word Memoir: A Life
by diabolico
I like it, it's smooth and flows well. Plus Its vary clear in its meaning, and I think vary true. The analogy of the mountaintop brings out the profound meaning of what your saying. (or a mountain top is what came to my mind when I read the word peaks)
[ View all reviews ]
Favorites
ITEMS (3)
MEMBERS (1)

 

Sci Fi & Fantasy / In My Garden
by JEDoherty
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Khamanra
by Leikela
Short Story / A Writer's Life in Six Words
by DCAllen

[ View all ]

People