ElectricLove has no favorites yet.
The Item you were looking for is marked as mature. If you are 18 or older please login to view it.
ElectricLove's profile
AGE:
17
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 02
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 02
This user has not yet uploaded an urbis user description/profile.
Items
Version 1
6 Reviews
2 Comments
"whats wrong autumn?",the question on everyone's lips. Just because of my "little accident", Im mentally unstable?I don't need anyone. When I did who was there? No one.Thats right. I fight my own battles.And Win. I can't help being who I am.I know Im a walking contradiction of gossip around town.The spiked comments on tickle me nowadays. I know I set myself up for scruitiny and can't blame anyone but myself,but i wish I could rely on something other than my medication. Nothing seems to be ......
Ratings & Rankings
Version 1
1 Review
0 Comments
You say you're here to stay But now my feelings can't go away I gave you my heart but we fell apart And I've never been the same After everything we went through Watching clouds go by in the sky so blue I thought you were meant for me I guess just how much I couldn't ever see We'll never be the same You are the one for me and I just can't see it any other way You've been there for me when I've needed you everyday But now you say that you're different, you say that we're done From forever I'll...
Ratings & Rankings
[ View all items ]
Reviews
I like how this poem has lots of emotion and its really from the heart Im sorry you lost your dad and its nice you have the comfort of know he's gone to a better place where god can protect him for you. Keep on praying This was a really good heartfelt piece :)
I like the attempt, You know how you say that "and we come back. Dirt always does" is that implying that we are the dirt and we are wrecking the place? I like it its unusual, not many good poems are about cleaning men but i can see the underlaying message to this piece I really like it keep up it good poems
Was a really good piece, can feel all the emotion in it. What i got from this was that children are the way forward and with all the rubbish going on in the world basically messing them up in wrecking it for everyone not them alone. another thing i liked about this piece was "Time is marching forward/ But her rhythm cannot change/And soon she finds the others/Who are dancing just the same " makes me think that its happening to children everywhere and no matter where you look you have corrupte...
this is really inspirational. From this I take away a feeling of new hope and i think that relating the growth of a sed to the growth of a person was very well used. The ending slightly confused me where did the "Unconditional love" come from? But i think that this has real potental
Sounds like its going to be a really intresting story. Very original . How did you come up with the idea? Can't wait to read the full version :)
[ View all reviews ]
Favorites
People
