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AGE: 29
LOC: Washington, PA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 25

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Non-fiction / Life of Life,continued.
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15 Reviews   2 Comments
As Joseph sat quietly in the bathroom his thoughts ran wild as a tornado to the wind. His thoughts of her come flooding back, back to when it all started. "Emily,what movie do ya wanna see tonight" says Joseph. "I dunno, whats all out"? Looking into and getting lost in her eyes Joseph replies, "Whatever you wanna see, call 'em up". "Ok". Later that evening while sittin in the theater watching some random action film Joseph held Emily throughout the whole film. Emily feeling very content in hi...
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Short Story / Life of Life
Version 1
28 Reviews   3 Comments
As Joseph sat quietly at the dining room table he felt an indifference like never before. With his long drawn face as if he had just lost his best friend, his mother had just told him the words he didn’t want to hear, “She was at church today”. Joseph gasped at this and as he felt inside his heart the breaking sound of glass and the shards digging deeper in him. His eldest brother James stood closly nearby feeling that he should hug him or say anything. “I should just stay away from there for...
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Action Adventure / The Warehouse
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Poetry / Perception
This had me wondering if the writer or whomever this is are they killing someone or making love. The end statement,"Shining blade falls," tells me someone is dead perhaps. Is it the man or woman who dies, or is it even death. Makes the mind wonder a bit. Makes you think. Is this about what and/or whom? sparks an interest in the readers mind but also confuses a little at the same time.
In the mind of authors is hard to say how and why but in your story here i must give you kudos, I really enjoyed it when i neared the end i was dissappointed but because that was all that was here. would like to see more and eventually an ending so I may also do a full review but as for this part of the story very enjoyable i was not left wondering what certain things meant as i do in other reviews i have done. Again good job here and cant wait to see more.
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Just as you stated in the beginning about easy reading being boring,most definitly!! Good job on describing all the different emotions and such, I liked the fact that you can express yourself as you did here.It leaves me wanting more,hopefully you do have more somewhere in your mind or maybe even on paper, cant wait.
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