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AGE: 47
LOC: Naples, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 19

I am currently posting my first attempt at writing. I would really like some honest feedback and suggestions. I love to review other peoples work because I love to read various styles. Please feel free to message me anytime.

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Version 2
9 Reviews   13 Comments
Looking around for Caroline, Megan was pissed. That asshole, who does he think he is? And why does he have such an effect on me? OK, I have been in relationships before, not many, but some, and never, ever has a man had such an effect on me. I could think of a million ways to have that man, god he makes me wet in places I thought were barren! Finally spotting Caroline, Megan walked over to her, only to see she was also with a man just like Barbara was. What the hell is with these women, Jeezu...
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Version 2
6 Reviews   6 Comments
Megan stood standing against the wall watching people mingling in the barn, sawdust on the floors, the musicians tuning their instruments. There were tables set up for the food she figured, and enough alcohol to drown half the state. Megan looked around for Barbara and Caroline but there were so many people she couldn't see very well. “Damn, I wish one of the girls would get their asses over here, I feel like I'm back in high school waiting for the class pointdexter to ask me if I want a drin...
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Version 3
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Laying her head back against the seat on the plane. Megan closed her eyes. Tired, tired, tired. How did I come to this point she wondered. She had not slept well since her conversation two weeks ago with Tom. What a arrogant ass she thought. Who needed or wanted him. Did he really think she would go back to him after all he had done to her? Yeah, uh, no. She remembered putting her head in her hands at the desk. Crying her eyes out and then laughing her ass off. Was she having a breakdown? Gre...
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Version 5
5 Reviews   3 Comments
Riding back to the stable, Josh decided he would have some lunch. It had been hot today, and wrestling with that uptight woman, he needed to put something in his stomach. I swear to God he thought, if it wasn't for his sister and his brother-in-law wanting to keep this ranch and land in the family, Josh would have high tailed it out of here long ago. Pulling off his gloves as he approached the front door, shaking the dust off his hat, he walked in to the hall and hung it on the hook. The long...
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Version 6
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Megan could not believe she was actually in Montana at a Dude Ranch. Looking around she noticed the lush trees, rolling hills and grass so green it looked like a field of dark emeralds. The air was clear, and the sky the most magnificent blue. So this was what they called cattle country. As she took in the vast landscape, she caught sight of some cows grazing in the pasture. She always wanted to see one up close, to see if they really had the big lips and long lashes like they did on those ta...
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