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AGE: 22
LOC: Rochester, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 11

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I went walking in the woods today; it sure was nice. Maybe the woods influenced my writing.

I had ten thousand dreams last night; they all were fun. Maybe my dreams infulence my writing.

I’ve done lots of drugs. It’s been good and it’s been bad, I know that has influenced my writing.

My dad owns a bar. Maybe that’s why I write.

I have an assortment of genes; ah genetics…maybe that has influenced my writing.

It’s only been 20 years, but I know that it’s enough to have brought me here.

Skiing is the best thing I have ever found. My advice: Go as fast as you can…

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Being A Girl
Version 1
6 Reviews   4 Comments
It surprises me every time. I am pretty strong, have been an athlete, mostly a ski racer. Man you wouldn’t believe the muscles in my legs. Still don’t have an ass though... I am not real girlie either. I mean, sure I like nice close and I do wear make-up. Yet when I am at the mountain I really don’t shower. I don’t put the make-up on. I love to piss outside. My fantasies are all in terms of cave-people. When I flirt, inexplicably, my language becomes rough. I even sit like a dude when I want ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / My Cousin
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4 Reviews   9 Comments
My cousin Tamara was always somebody who I looked up to, even if she put mustard on her french fries. That was my first memory of her. We were at the ski house and I must have been around the age of three. Tamara had spent a few years out west, living, skiing, (snorting), who knows what else. She must have been in her late twenties by the time she came back, and yes she is my first cousin. She was down in the main lodge and we had to meet up with her. There she was, my beautiful, blonde, big ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Exploding Hippies (a letter)
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9 Reviews   12 Comments
Dear Pedro, I am writing you another letter because I haven’t got much else to do. I didn’t go skiing today because of the rain and the warm weather. (I can’t bear to see the mountain in this state!) So I have just been hanging out all day, reading that Janis Joplin book and listening to music. Because I have hardly moved today I thought that I ought to go for a walk around the meadows. I took my ipod and you know what those kinds of actions can lead to… they only ever lead to thought. As I r...
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Poetry / Not Quite Asleep
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5 Reviews   8 Comments
Lay there, not quite asleep- Don’t forget to breath deep eyes closed, tight- against an itchy red beard. Feels good when lips press softly against an eyebrow- A sleepy, gentle, intoxicated kiss like a dream.
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Poetry / Night
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Lay there, not quite asleep- Don’t forget to breath deep eyes closed, tight- against an itchy red beard. Feels good when lips press softly against an eyebrow- A sleepy, gentle, intoxicated kiss like a dream.
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Short Story / The Confessional
by CourtshipLives
Good job with driptions! I mean right off the bat: "tune of his sandpaper steps" Great job! The priest's voice sounds like that of a preist! "nigra" ? what is that? a misspelling? Wow, just a thrilling story. What more can I say?
Short Story / Morning Coffee
by Roland_D
How about puncuation and regualr form for a story. I like the idea, but I don't like reading it.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / you wake up...
by Deadsage
I have never, ever been in said position, but the way you right brought me there and made me feel it and beleiev it. Good job! This seems like a magazine peice to me. I wish I could offer advice, but I don't think it can get any better than it is.
Short Story / The Exciting Memories of a Porn Actress
by axelk
I know a girl who does porn and I think that her major is Journalism. She writes well of I remember correctly... I hate stories that begin with "my name is..." there are better ways to do that! I think that there are many who know that they have that super power too, evebn if they are not porn stars.
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Gone
by Anonymous
"Her younger brother by a year" This sounds awkward and we don't even know how old she is yet. That third paragraph is really rough. Man, I cannot for the life of me understand what you are talking about. " were best friends" It seems funny to me that I cop would use a phrase like that. I would replace it with the word "close" to sound more coppish if you know what I mean. What? Hmmmm. she killed someone. You really drop that on us. I wonder if there could be a different sort of preamble. Whe...
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