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AGE: 17
LOC: Benton, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 28

Ok one thing you must know about me is that i don’t get on much. So if you want a new chapter in  a story or a response then your going to have to comment or send an email.

I love to write and i have differnet verietys and horrible spelling.

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The 5%
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In the year 2017 the Earth has become a desolate waist land. Humans are scarce along with food and water supplies. Astronauts and other richer peoples have tried and failed at living in space. In the end, humans are said to be on the brink of extinction. The life of the surviving humans has become animalistic and feral. It is rare for humans to speak correct English, or proper English at that is extremely rare. It is not even thought of as humans being able to be taught to be civilized any lo...
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Ch.2: Disobeying Orders For the first time in a long while, people watched Briel enter her fourth block class room with a tear stained red face. Though it didn’t last long it was something. But not soon after she entered the class and sat at her seat at the back corner of the room, did people begin to gossip once again. She heard things about her killing someone again, being a thief, and any other scenario that made her visit to Officer Crowen’s office reasonable. She sighed and looked at th...
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Novel Treatments / A Threat To Love You/Edit
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Ch.1: Lies Leading the Ignorant No one trusted Briel Malday anymore. Since she was twelve the towns people had always avoided her. It all happened then, at her young age. Her mother had died and the cops had found her next to her mother, covered in her blood. This didn’t help her at all when it came to questioning and going to court. She tried to convince them she was innocent. She told only the truth; how she had lain by her mother and loved her as she died. For what else could she have done...
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It had all started out as an adrenaline rush. Ryan and Shelby wanted to get something out of the last few moments of their night out, and they were going to do that by exploring the old and said to be haunted insane asylum that was to be demolished the next morning. “For a memory,” Ryan suggested as he locked his well hidden car, “This place will be gone soon, so why not check the place out and have a little fun?” Shelby wasn’t normally into the scare tactic things that Ryan was. But she did ...
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Novel Treatments / Ch.2 A Threat To Love You/Edit
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Ch.2: Disobeying Orders For the first time in a long while, people watched Briel enter her fourth block class room with a tear stained red face. Though it didn’t last long it was something. But not soon after she entered the class and sat at her seat at the back corner of the room, did people begin to gossip once again. She heard things about her killing someone again, being a thief, and any other scenario that made her visit to Officer Crowen’s office reasonable. She sighed and looked at the...
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Poetry / Shell of Love
"And I drop amidst the confusion." This part confused me a little. You may need to be more spicific at what you drop: your love, yourself? "Endless propaganda beats my eyeballs" I cant help but think that there needs to be something put here. Beasts into my eyeballs maybe? I'm not sure but it needs a little something. "Incredible despair touches my already bruised skin." I like this, this is a very good sentance. It gives emotion and feeling to the poem. It helps the reader understand what th...
Short Story / Bloodheat
I like the story overall but it could use some work. Maybe rewording somethings and giving us more hints as to what is really going on.
Criticism / Defining Truth
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Poetry / CRIMSON
I like the way you put this down into words, they move so smoothly in this poem. Keep up the good work.
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