DragonBlue's profile

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AGE: 46
LOC: Phoenix, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 02

Greetings & Salutations!

I am called MoonChild of GaeaDragonBlue, though some refer to me as DragonBlue or Mz Blue. I have two beautiful daughters, Aspasia Lorraine and Aricia Elizebeth. I reside in Phoenix, Arizona. I have a degree in Business Administration, and I am a Jill of all Trades – Master of Some.

I am a freelance published writer of poetry and am Assistant Editor and Columnist for Art With Words—-A Poetry Publication Quarterly. We are looking at taking this publication to the e-zine level this year and hope for prosperity to come of it.

In my spare time, I design web pages, learn new software and maintain my Poetry Communities: Poetry Lair of DragonBlue and my MSN Group Dragon Blue’s Poetry

My spiritual path …

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Breath of Living Measures What ‘tis the Legacy Thee wish to really leave? When only thy deeds Are alive and breathe? How will ye-- Be known and seen? Generous and loving or full of greed? What ‘tis the name ye leave thy prodigy? Remembered with respect and love that inspired trust? Or will it be one of control, gold and blood lust? Ye must decide, What it will be... In conflict to collide-- with thine own integrity. Ye must live it today-- in every loving way. Paradigms...
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Poetry / Birth of Change
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Birth of Change Neon Signs Rotting rinds Fast food places Even faster paces Dim street lamps Property stamps Scarecrow trees Worn faces appease Chunks of mortar crumbling From broken buildings Calm before the storm Rips all asunder in thorns So began civilizations decline Rising with no reason nor rhyme Cold greed Clutches need Humanity amasses crowds Clenching the bowels At the center Of Earth Mother Can we see – Birth In the death of this society?  
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A Warriors Inspiration Inspiration these days is hard to come by Wonder do I, if the well has run dry Though in the mundane Growth is in abundance Spiritually I feel as if I stagnate Poetic, charming words of faery Are seen between lines of life I carry My Gaea Dragon glows blue My totem Grizzly growls at new Souls I long to call my friends Give lovingly free with my heart again As with my inner voice His leaves me no choice But guard myself and be wise Testing all of the truth in lies The s...
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As the Soft Falling Rain As the rain falls ye relive the past. Realizing that all ye lost was at last, what they stold. Robbed thy heart, scorched thy soul. When ye start to remember as ye begin to heal, reviewing their crimes heaped upon thy innocence until, it was gone with time. Anger is cleansing as ye replay their betrayal so wrong in many pictures faded and frayed never hearing thy song. Thy rain will hold ye in it's arms provide to thee comfort of the womb Thy rain will not ever bring...
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As I Await the Quickening My ruling planet of Mother Moon In my heart strikes up in tune Melodies that are divine to hear Symphonies that tickle the ear. As the tides of the waters rise Emotions race through lows and highs When finally, I release my tears falling over boulders of painful years.. Filling the deserts dry sands Flooding with fire and demands. Laughing, I think logically to extreme Then giggle as feelings join this team. One plus one always equals two Unbeknownst to me, variables...
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FIRST IMPRESSION: I can't help but think that you are speaking about a girl/guy you are in a relationship with and don't know how you got there. SUGGESTIONS: None. I did not find any typo or spelling errors and the rhyme and meter are perfect. OVERALL: My personal preference is of longer poems, but most prefer the shorter. Title you have works well with my first impression. Write On!! )O( db
Poetry / 3-4-10
FIRST IMPRESSION: I just want to express my empathy, as I know how this feels. I am sorry that another female had to endure what most males consider a God given right. The laughter, derisive, contemptable, belittling and demeaning comes back to haunt a soul for many decades. (usually an entire lifetime) SUGGESTIONS: None. OVERALL: More of us need to write just like this, in explicit detail of how much it hurts, where it hurts and how deep it really penetrates our psyche. Silence is an ally to...
Poetry / Apparition
WOW! This was complex, sophisticated and completely a representative of an intense relationship. Sorry it's over and down to 'just friends'. Write on! )O( db
FIRST IMPRESSION: Excellent write as a social commentary on today's society. Your vocabulary is refreshing and your rhythm perfect. SUGGESTIONS: I did not see any typo or spelling errors, I would only seperate the pen by the verb, then noun, all the way down the page to enunciate each point made. OMHO. OVERALL: An excellent read. Thank you and write on! )O( db
Poetry / Knocking
FIRST IMPRESSION: This reads like a song with a good hook in the chorus. Could be a greeting card as well. I liked the simplicity of your expression to love and be loved. SUGGESTIONS: "Don't mean to be petty but i am at your door"--- 12 beats "with flowers and candy... waiting for and wanting you more"--- 14 beats COULD ADD WORDS TO FIRST 2 LINES or REWRITE LAST 2 LINES AS: "waiting, wanting you more" THIRD STANZA - your rhyme scheme is AB and CD but your FIRST STANZA is AC and BD. Remain con...