Dpoetic1's profile
AGE:
35
LOC: Madison, TN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 30
LOC: Madison, TN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 30
I am a 31, soon to be 32 year old professional. I currently reside in Nashville, Tn. I’ve been living here for 3 years. I have really been working on my craft for the last year. I have started doing a lot of open mic nights. I’m hoping to get published by the end of the year. I am my work. I wish to seranade life with my words and hopefully find the love i write about so often. Until then, i write and stay close to my God. I am a proud father of the most marvalous little girl that was and has been blessed from her first day of life…even though she was only 1lb 12oz. I live for her. I hope this piece helps you know me.
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It's bizarre how your eye twitch when you are lying... But still you try, You tell me what you want me to hear, But the truth stays right out of the reach of my ears, You mesmerize me with the misconceptions of your intentions, For you tell me you love me, But disrespect me with every word your tongue utters, Can you take the time to get your story together and maybe then my intelligence will feel less insulted, Consultant, that is what I would suggest, a fictional writer for your daily commu...
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I have done everything but beg you I have attempted releasing all of my fears and divulging my desires I have done all I can to maintain what we have But our have is disintegrating into what was You have not listened to a word I have uttered And if you have…it hasn’t shown Is it best that we end this today So we have an opportunity at a happier tomorrow I find myself angered and hurt by you in the same breath How can you love someone but contribute nothing to its work My question, are you ha...
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You promised me a tomorrow, you said you would never leave me, but you are no longer here, and we no longer together, My name is no longer whispered from your lips, I can not recall the last time I held you within my arms, my soul screams to be reattached to it’s counter-part, Where are you and what are you doing Indian Giver They said we look so good together, that our children’s children will be remarkably attractive, my eyes, your beauty, a combination of God’s serenity, you took all of th...
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I’m angered by your presence Confused at my feelings I love the love in me But too bitter to accept it I’m damaged and I can’t face it I have wounds that scares my soul But will not allow them to heal I stumble on conceptions Drown in delusions Bask in the thought of a yesterday I fall in and out of love To find myself in the same place I have destroyed everything I have had Made my past an inferno of mistakes I have created pain To remind me that I am still among the living I have crucified ...
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Harassed by the thoughts of a you and I, Plagued with imagined memories of a past, that we never had, I know where I belong, I am fulfill with the knowledge of who I love and will grow old With, I have dance with grace, dined with beauty, conversant with elegance, Realization of a distant future, a canalization of what this truly is, LOVE, I have pictured you since I was a young boy, Visualize the contours of your face, the shape of your frame, the depth of your eyes, the Pitch of your voice...
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Very very creative. It pulls and releases you several times throughout. I enjoyed. I did seem jumbled at times. I found myself rereading once or twice to try to gather your direction or feelings. Over all, it is nice and very visual. Please keep doing what you're doing.
I like it, i like it a lot! This is a very sexy, intelligent poem. I thought you were heading one way, but you proved me wrong. I like this a lot. Keep doing what you're doing!
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I'm pretty indefferent. I see great promise, but it just carries the feel like you shorten it or just didn't complete it.
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