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LOC: Bayonne, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 09
LOC: Bayonne, NJ
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 09
Hey I’m Jason. I’m 17 and a highschool student. I don’t really consider myself a writer, but from time to time I feel the compulsion to vomit out the stories that won’t leave me alone. I hope you enjoy my work.
“Search fearlessly for every sin. For out of sin comes joy.”
~Frank Wedekind
“We’re ACTORS! We’re the opposite of people!”
~ Tom Stoppard(Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead)”
” Every moment in life is a learning experience. Or what good is it, right? ”
~John Guare (Six Degrees of Separation)
“Pull free of the Scylla of religious delusion, and you fall victim to the Charybdis of superstition!”
~Frank Wedekind (Fruhlings Erwachen(Spring Awakening))
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Just One More Face In The Crowd Lights Up on a typical New York lawyer on a therapist’s couch. He carries himself like a man holding on for dear life to a desperate secret. He is smoking a cigarette and clearly distressed. His therapist, a woman in her mid-thirties, in a corporate-esque dress and her hair in a tight bun, is on with him, but lighting only suggests a shadowy profile. She should be able to be seen, as she will be pantomiming movements and murmuring, asking questions that only t...
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Just One More Face In The Crowd Lights Up on a typical New York business man on a therapist’s couch. He carries himself like a man holding on for dear life to a desperate secret. He is smoking a cigarette and clearly distressed. A clock ticking can be heard in the background. As lights go up, he goes from distressed to somewhat amused. Man Y’know, it’s funny you should ask that. I’ve been going to therapists my entire life( lights up a new cigarette), and every time I tell them I’m…( he is c...
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It was amazing. The prose was detailed without being too showy, the dialogue was real, the story interesting, everything was perfect. I don't have the patience with all these stupid window things, but from what I read, I loved it. I literally have no criticism to give you. I hope you get published very soon, because if this was a book, I would buy it.
I think this was amazing. I really felt the pain and fear and frustration of the soldier. I have very little critique, because I think you executed this peice flawlessly. One thing I noticed was every now and then, the character would say something a bit hokey... like the whole part about him going into the war at the end. But it was never serious enough to detract from the story. Also, I liked the way he sounded sort of philosophical at some points, like "Age shall not weary me, nor the year...
I liked it. I mean, it dragged in some parts and a good chunk of what you were saying made no sense to me. I'm curious about how old the character is to have given up hope for any sense of progress in his life. It didn't make much sense to me why he ended up like this, but it was still more or less effective. But it doesn't read to me like he's all that depressed. More like he's bored. You have some work to do, but you have something here, I think.
Well, I have to admit, you could've gone alot of places with it that just weren't reached. The dialogue really bothered me. I can't picture normal people talking like that and I didn't relate to any of the characters. Ok, now that that's over, I loved the stage directions at the beginning and I wish you would've ran with the whole interpretive thing and had more original ones towards the middle/end. I could kind of sense the tension between Dali and his father, but I was taken out of the stor...
Well, I'm curious to hear the tune that would accompany this, but the lyrics were decent. Not incredibly deep or moving, but not horrid. I didn't get the part about the tears living on. But other than that, it was enjoyable.
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