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LOC: Boardman, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 24
LOC: Boardman, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 24
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Introduction The nuclear bomb went off at 4:20 pm pacific time. No one knows how or why it happened; all we know is that it did. The explosion killed thousands and its radiation spread for miles. All it...
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Introduction The nuclear bomb went off at 4:20pm pacific time. No one knows how or why it happen, all we know is that it did. The explosion killed thousands and it radiation spread for miles. All it took was a blink of an eye, for our lives to change forever. All those caught in the blast where thought to have died. The only thing that was thought to have remained was fire and devastation. But among the rumble of fallen buildings and over turn vehicles was our hope for the future and our answ...
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I like this pice of yours, it was well writen. You have a great talent that catches the readers attion. I would like to see more of your work. so keep writing and you can go far.
I think your story was really good. I would like to read more and see where you take it. I not big on editing stories, so i will just tell you how what i like about your story. I like how you draw in the reader and how you make it so life like. I can see it all unfolding in my head which is always a great thing. I can wait to see more of your work so keep writing you can go real far i think.
I like it I cant wait to read more. you did a good job of setting up the reader, so they will want to read more. You set up the secane real well, I could picture the story unfold in my head. Keep writing I think you have a great start to a story and I would like to see where you take it.
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