DarkShadow's profile

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AGE: 36
LOC: Ocala, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 25

I’m 34, gay, pagan, and love to write.  

I have only been writing for about 5 months, though have found it to be a new passion of mine.  I’m working on several books at the moment so I’m a bit slow sometimes to get enough credits to view your reviews.  Please excuse me for this.  You can also view my scribbles at www.myspace.com/darkshadowstories

Take care!

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Lycan Prologue
Version 2
2 Reviews   3 Comments
The Lycan Prologue His words held a regal kindness but I knew their meaning instantly. “Show no mercy Taylor. Tear them limb from limb. This is not the time for gentle hearts.” Jason leaned in and pressed his lips against my neck. “You don’t know what you ask.” I wanted to rest in the curve of his body as his fingertips trailed along my flesh. It was one thing to change into my animal form. It was yet another to completely give myself to my nature. I had fought the primal call for too long. A...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Road Trip
Version 1
1 Review   1 Comment
Chapter 10 Road Trip The morning sun blazed against the back of my eyelids and the chill of the autumn morning made me want to dig deeper into the warmth of Bry’s body. The frost filled air shook my chest as I yawned. I pulled Bry’s arm around me and tried to squirm deeper into the covers to hide the small bits of flesh that were exposed to the frigid air during my night’s slumber. I heard his sharp intake of breath as I twisted around and buried my face into his warm chest. The tip of my nos...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Nephillim
Version 1
2 Reviews   5 Comments
The Nephillim Prologue I lay thrashing about in the bottom of the bath tub, nude, and half wrapped in a tangle of shower curtain. I slipped, and my 7 foot 2 inch frame made more noise than I thought possible as I grappled for anything to keep my balance. I failed and took the shower curtain with me. The spray of water seemed to suddenly change direction as though the shower head had taken on a life of its own, adding to the chaos. “Hey Mallik, you okay?” Darryl’s muffled words came through th...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Druid Chapter 9 Reunion
Version 1
1 Review   0 Comments
Chapter 9 Reunion Finally reaching the end of the driveway I felt for the familiar lump in my front pocket. Like many things I carried with me, my pocket knife was always there. I used it for trimming the plants of my garden, but now I had other work for it. I pulled out the blade and placed it against the fat of my palm and gave a quick jerk. The bite of metal into my flesh was a sudden flash of pain, but I endured it. I folded back the knife and pushed it back into my pocket for safe keepin...
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Poetry / I write words...
Version 1
11 Reviews   10 Comments
I write the words but I do not live. I hope that one day my words will give me means, To live as I have always dreamed I could, without regret.
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Short Story / Dark Wind
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I like the words, but the imagery was a bit abstract. To me it read like a politician's naivety as each hope and wish is systematically crushed, and all that is left, is the corrupt soul in a suit or snappy skirt set. Still I like it. It's a simple slice of honesty and easy on the mind. Thank you for sharing it.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Crossing of the Damsel
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Fool's Gambit - Chapter Eight
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There were parts of this that were almost funny. It was like Jackie Brown meets Dudley DoRight on crack. If I ever see this movie on the screen, I would have to stab myself in the eye with a spork, or smoke so damn much weed I'd laugh myself into a coma. Save for the few typos... it seems you wrote this deliberately, but the timing and 'comedy' is a bit off. I'm HOPING that this is supposed to be written as a spoof, if not... I can't offer much else.