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AGE: 30
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 23

Poetry and Philosophy are the things I spit. Art is a love affair I would never quite…well, maybe if the price was right i’d make the sacrifice, but for now poetry is my thing.

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Poetry / Reflection Eternal
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When you look into the mirror, what is it you see? Do you see natural beauty or a celebrity? You take one glance, than another You brush your hair to one side, and then the other, You tilt your head to capture a definitive stance, oblivious to foreign looks of bewilderment …still fixated on that image? What is it you see, is it real or a fantasy? Is this a preoccupation with personal enlightenment or self-indulgence? Pop culture has anointed your senses with distorted references of...
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Poetry / The Score
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By DarkAngel123 The definitive work is never done, it’s always under construction A good work ethic drives a writer to keep on going  Realizing my time is finite, I tirelessly seek that elusive light, that sheds clarity on the things I don’t know Never content with the first draft, always cognizant of the aftermath, because expression can be quaint, it always finds itself on trial by a committee of saints For I speak subjectively, to an objective following Always prepar...
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Poetry / Love is all we need
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  By DarkAngel123 Emotions can bounce off like waves of magnetism I prefer to disrupt its frequency with a pacifier of lead, using it to perfect unseemly lines with comprehensive verses of linearity Domains of superstition are exchanged for concepts of fruition Never abandoning the land to fallow, for desertification is the conduit that leaves the soul hollow Somtimes desires call for redemption by means of retribution, not knowing which direction blows the winds of solution Love is the ...
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Poetry / Lamentation
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Phieo Love By DarkAngel123 Veiled in mystery, her beauty cannot be measured by the eyes of a carnal mind Her heart torn apart so many times, she carried the scars of a million souls Crying tears out like the winepress, she wondered if grief would ever let go Salvation came adorned in strength and honor ‘Its’ hands stretched endlessly into her body of pain Serenading her with caresses warm and penetrating ‘It’ loved her, embracing what it could not understand There&rs...
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Poetry / The Journey
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Memories lay deep in the mystic searching for visions of a sunset, while trees of antiquity speak in tongues of melody, guiding impulses like data on the information highway Spiritual discernment leaves no stones unturned, and every creature of habit interred in a myriad of guilt Still, proclivities for descent are committed, when the eyes of the 'Host' has abandoned its post Leaves litter the field indiscriminately, creating a kaleidoscope of confusion, as thoughts are illuminated to th...
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Poetry / Spoiled
by Anonymous
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Poetry / Stressed
by flamebringer15
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Poetry / to the unentitled. (climb further and fall)
by D_Munn
I can appreciate the attempts at qualifying the human condition, however there's something about this piece that comes off as being too vague and unfinished. I believe the opening paragraph should set the tone for any written work, I thought "I feel pain therefore I am" comes of as being flat (btw: why is the "and" preceded by a semi colon (;) shouldn't there be a comma (,)? I was a little confused by the line "I can feel my soul as sediment, a living organ crawling outside..."; what are you ...
Poetry / an essential soul
by D_Munn
Positives: On the surface this is a good read. I like the quality of your words and overall expression. I thought the last line ("Pavement crumbles and faiths fail, but she will never age and never grow frail") captured the essence of the piece. Negatives: None
Poetry / "The Conscience of Love"
by MaestraMarisa
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