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AGE:
25
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 19
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 19
“Insane, I have no real reason for feeling like I do
I am alive and so are you
I am only telling the truth
Miserable I know and I am NOT sorry
I just walk along singing the same old song
Hey, how are you?
Insane, I have no real reason for feeling like I do”
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"You can send a man to battle and he will fight tooth and nail. Send man up against a woman, and he will crumble and break"
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I wipe my tears away With a heavy hand Understand I’m not real and nor are you I see through English heritage and Yank dreams Coming true You are the carrier the cancer the pest A worm for the birds to swallow I wallow in your shadow Created by a gas Man made sun I have begun My son of a hundred years Of human manipulation and masturbation Of a cruel man’s right hand I still don’t understand
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"I protest and stand defiant, and I uphold the right to speak. My freedom of speech is my only freedom left and I still can’t speak without fear of retribution and destruction upon my innocent head. And I am fearful that if I do not stand before you with clenched fists then everything I believe in will be destroyed in a flash of ignorance and immoral injustice". Footsteps on the war torn earth, above the only wildlife left is the sound of helicopters destroying harmony pharmacy the only real...
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This poem is very straight to the point and easy to understand. Relationships are often if not the most popular subject in poetry. I beleive you could go futher with this attempt. First I would change the last lines as they don't really fit in with the rest of the poem, not so much the words just the way they are said in context to the rhymes before them. Try to mix up different words as well. Also in that last bit lose the second "heart". Just an idea but how about this Our hearts were as on...
Intresting quote in the sence that its easy to understand and written in a simple straight to the point way. Ofcourse indivisualism will always attract critics and cynics, I have always stood out on my own as do many of my friends of all race and sexuality. To keep following your own path to fullfill your own existence is very inportant and in 2007 there really are'nt that many (if any at all)taboos left to destroy. But we do find ourselves still fighting the same arguements with the nieve a...
I really love the style of this poem here. Youre use of question is very well done. The metaphors are great and I realy love the line "Sail through the air as an echo through the valley" I sometimes struggle to keep my lines consistent and easy to digest when trying to catch an emotion down in poem, but your poem is easy to read and stays consistent through out. I may have learnt something here lol. DK
Wow Rave......... This really grabbed me and I really did'nt want to stop reading and I am not just saying that. What really grabs me is your style, it really rolls and is very intense. You describe the atmosphere really well. The erotic aspect was done very well cause you kept it believable and tastefull. I will definatly read the rest of the story. Nice one....... DK
This is a very nice quote, I understand the idea here. I agree that sometimes we try to give to others to sometimes help them but realise that we struggle to help our selves. This quote sums that up for me. Good work. DK
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