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AGE:
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LOC: Colorado Springs, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 26
LOC: Colorado Springs, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 26
having a wife and 2 baby boys is hard. Having a wife 2 boys and trying to compose their future with my writing is greuling…but every minute i spend crafting a better life for my family is worth going through all the crapified nonsense of life. Dont regret what you’ve done wrong…admire yourself for the flaws you’ve accomplished…you would scare me if you were perfect
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Devon just couldn’t sleep. It wasn’t enough that Devon’s mattress was poking him in the back and legs with it’s rusted springs. It wasn’t enough that his shirt had twisted itself around Devon’s neck and arms. And it certainly wasn’t enough that one of Devon’s long toenails was snagging on fabric with every single movement. What remained of Devon's measly tie to the dream world was quickly severed by loud bangs that came from his ceiling....
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Through mistakes we learn Within flaws we are unique Perfection scares me
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Part one Prelude to the Storm I will never forget how much it hurts. Every time that I have been charged with that horrible act. Every time we had to fight, every time I had to put him down, it has killed a part of me. And it kills me now just being out here, where we last fought. The scars upon my soul match that of the ground I walk on. What was once a beautiful utopia, now nothing but a blinding wasteland. As though I run my fingers across such a jagged and luminescent surface, it reminds ...
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im going through something like this right now...man you spoke to me directly as for the prose...only one slight issue for consideration ****Goodbye doesn't seem so bad any longer*** the line is a little long so using more instead of longer will make the piece a little more fluid
YES!!!...i loved the broadening of the plot and story...hooked me in...FINALLY the characters are now well pronounced so you can focus on the story itself im following keep it up
this was a good piece i liked how you...lol jk you know i wasnt about to start that cliche as for the dreams...you are right...however there is more to dreaming as a bi product...what matters most...what stresses you most...phobias...lost connections with no appropriate closure...they are the gateway into your mind you can avoid you random thoughts throughout your day but your dreams are always uncontrollable...so who's to say that your brain uses what stimulates you the most for most efficie...
wow...this was both very saddening and humorous at the same time. i assume this is a real encounter, which makes it so much more amusing. Sure, her situation is sad, but people die and life goes on. She seems like the type that cries when her hamster dies...a dependency on companionship. in other words, QUEEN OF THE CLINGIES i dont know if it was right to laugh, but laugh i did. and the use of, of such imagery...butterflies and caterpillars...dam someone get out the bug spray... all in all......
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