Crysa's profile

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AGE: 26
LOC: Lebanon, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 19

I am a book reviewer for “Fantasy Magazine”. (darkfantasy.org)  5 of my poems have been accepted by “Conceit Magazine” and “Amulet” and will be published in various issues throughout the next year.  I have two short stories currently in circulation, 4 more written and in need of polishing, and 3 more that consist mostly of detailed outlines.  I’m also about 10,000 words into my novel, a fantasy/horror story about a nurse during the Civil War.  

I’ve noticed that many people don’t like my reviews.  I don’t understand why there is the rating system for reviews…when reviewers are ASKED to provide their opinion.  I am RIGHT.  When I give a review.  I’m honest about what I think.  I.  I don’t care if you think I didn’t “get” it.  Maybe I…

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Flash Fiction / Beautiful Disaster
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Moonlight Chapter 1 - Trapped
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Poetry / SWITZERLAND
Overall, I would have to say that I found this quite boring. What you are describing shouldn't be boring, it should be magestic and brisk. I would suggest rethinking the constant rhyming. Or, more appropriately, rethinking your lack of imagery. I don't see the place you are descibing. I'm seeing someone laboring over making sure every line rhymes. "WITH IT'S LAKES AND MOUNTAINS FOR ALL TO SEE, THERE IS A FEELING THAT LEADS TO..." "Hmm, See...Be, Lee, Dee, Cree-Creed? No, See, See, FREE!, Ah, ...
Short Story / number one scene
I think your request for reviewers not to comment on typos and errors is a unreasonable, to the reviewers and to yourself. When you are writing something with so few words, the words you choose and the way you display them are very important. Aside from the errors you’d rather I didn’t mention, I didn’t like this. It could just be that this “drabbling” doesn’t appeal to me, but I think that it is the writing. This could be written better. Much better. It’s very stilted and feels very childish...
Novel Treatments / Beware, Here be Dragons
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