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AGE:
30
LOC: Tacoma, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 14
LOC: Tacoma, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 14
I’m a photographer/Artist, Poet/Novelist, Singer/Songwriter from Seattle, WA.
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A dark cloud hanging over this Negative image, I clear it A bad day and I taste it Still when I open my eyes It's not a dream It won't clear the skies You hear my words But all you hear is hate Why can't you hear my love Because it's so much more to what I relate But you only see my flaws You only speak of what you find disappointing Only what you find wrong Stop looking at the scratches on my surface And start looking into my window of what's underneath Or one day my heart will become a cold...
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I take a deep breath When I hear your words go in one ear And out the next You complain about sketches that have been drawn in pen Yes, the pen was in my hand But you added onto the sketch after everything was said….and done Exaggerated in detail Imagined it all up in your head Nothing is left for me to say…..to you You scream your thought They hit the wall as I crack My head screaming every time you come near Even in whisper It’s never clear …to&helli...
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As I'm closed in this Anger that runs through me, it filters all my purities Pushes me to scream, I can't break this fury The sun, burns through me, never soothing like a flame, perpetual blame, this blind rage I can't stage, I can't control this Don't know if I should Don't know if I want to It seems insane I open my mouth, but nothing comes out It circles in my head, feelings misled You said I'm trippin On this great ps...
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Saw you the other day Trapped inside this look That look You turned away Reached down, Deep inside you Pulled out only questions why? And all the anger you seclude I hear your whispers Of confusion and hate But you never answer You're too afraid Stare too far down Too empty inside You've drug yourself down too deep It won't let you cry Your anger, it destorys you Burns down deep and it thrives The emotion that fills you I can't watch you die You took away from me These words I speak If I don'...
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I feel so insecure inside your words Can't get enough you, It's so absurd I can't argue with the way I feel, What I feel today Can't run Can't hide Iturn and peel In front of you I've spoken this view Dressed in desire if you only knew How this is tearing me apart It's breaking me up into pieces now Living without this being open to me It contains my overlook of how it works Your thoughts unwilling because you feel you've died So what, get over it, you're in my past Leave it alone, quit dwell...
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Your chapter is very direct in what you want to get out but almost too direct and not enough description. It becomes choppy in my mind. I do love crime stories and am interested in what happens next so you have definitely grabbed my attention....it's just a little choppy in my mind when I read it.
Very descriptive in what goes on inside the character's mind. Reading this I was able to paint a movie.
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