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AGE: 13
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 03

Comming soon, Flames of Fate, a series that has blood, betrayal, soul, passion, and life.

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Poetry / Surrounded
Version 1
2 Reviews   2 Comments
Couples everywhere I turn. I am one, Surrounded my twos. I stand alone. I am surrounded. What happened, love It surrounds, but won’t touch me, I am a loner. Like an odd number, There’s always one left. I’m singing solo, Accompanied by many duets. Like a bird unable to fly, I feel useless. Like a broken record, Thrown away. Like the dead, Buried. I’m in white, At a funeral. I’m the flower with no petals. Am I the evil, Surrounded by good? Where’s my romant...
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Haiku/Senryu / Luminescence
Version 3
1 Review   1 Comment
Rising or falling, Different for everyone, Makes your feelings glow.
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Haiku/Senryu / (Untitled)
Version 2
1 Review   1 Comment
Rising or falling, Different for everyone, Makes your feelings glow.
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Short Story / Dick and Jane
Version 1
2 Reviews   4 Comments
Slowly descending is Dick. Jane suddenly unfreezes seeing behind her ex-husband, is her daughter Nell. Nell fallows slowly behind him, looking confident. Jane yells out to her, “Nell, stay away from him, run!” Nell attempts to run, but her father has a firm grip on her shoulder. Nell screams in a mixture of fear, confusion, and frustration. As her scream echoes through the house, Dick throws back his head and laughs. Jane grabs her cup of hot Herbal tea, and drenches him in it. Ne...
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Poetry / True Friends
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3 Reviews   1 Comment
True friendships neither end nor chip like a sister or brother they are like no other A real friend, will stand to the end They don't even bend they make you feel special no problems to wrestle So be a true friend Stand 'till the end
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Poetry / Fair
I'm at a loss for words really. I loved this. I liked the seperation of the lines. It created dramatic effect. Good work. :)
Oh my goodness. This was just...fantastic. I sat at the computer starring at the screen for a while. One thing i would change is the third line. i got a creepy feeling. maybe rewording it would help get your point across.
Poetry / The Ride Home:
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