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AGE:
21
LOC: Miami, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 28
LOC: Miami, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 28
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Lying on the edge of the flowery lake Her hair flowed like currents of soft autumn hues And smoky lashes bordered Her sparkling green eyes I kissed her under the tree Where we carved our names in time Where the old tire swing hung And lobbed us into the lake every summer On the same patch of grass Where I memorized Every freckle constellation on her cheeks And every orange fleck inside her eyes Across from the bridge Where she dangled her feet Over the cool, misty water And proposed to me ...
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This noose hugged me tighter than you ever did, And the chill of death's warmer than your summer kiss Is this really how our story ends? Your back on his mattress, My spine on the bend? I'm covered in flashlights, you're covered in "friends." While sirens moan for me how you never will again.
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This noose hugged me tighter than you ever did, And the chill of death's warmer than your summer kiss Is this really how our story ends? Your back on your mattress, My spine on the bend? I'm covered in flashlights, you're covered in "friends." While sirens moan for me how you never will again.
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this is more of a prayer than a poem it seems. and without any dense knowledge of islam, the reader can't make heads or tails of this. i know i couldnt. but thats just my opinion. im sure it makes sense to someone of islamic faith though.
your word plays or "sill language tricks" arent to clever or amusing actually. half the time i cant even make out the meter it should be read in. just being honest
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