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AGE:
23
LOC: SF, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 08
LOC: SF, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 08
Have a passion for writing, seeing where it can take me. Looking for advice, reviews, and wisdom.
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Verse 1 Wake up, put on you clothes shut the door and slip out. She would ask you to stay. It would be such an awkward moment to catch me sneaking out now. I've been there, and she asked me to stay. And I knew right away when we met that we were not meant to be. You drank the wine; fine. I didn't feed you many words to have you. You played along much better, hope you didn't see promise. Chorus It's numbing me inside to have to hurt you, I keep a distant step from love's virtue. ...
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Verse 1 We both know that you won't leave me and so you'll suffer greatly you know. You just stand there, collapse, collapse, collapse. You even tried to help me and then I did it over again. You still just stand there. Collapse, collapse, collapse. Chorus We were destined for each other, it's written, forever. Like sunlight & the darkness we'll struggle together. Verse 2 So don't you think to leave me. Confess, You'll alway's be here, our mess. You'llalway's stand there, col...
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Verse 1 Member's of the conscieness heed the warning of my breath, your moving faster than I expect and soon enough we will have met. This empire of gold, taxes on your soul. Chrous The dark of death is creeping fast the light of life is shining less come across the bounds of life and into open arms of death. Verse 2 Don't speak of worlds you've never walked the shadow's alway's follow you. The time will come to surrender thought and there's nothing you can say or do. Your li...
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I center on error's they make fun of me, slaughter my vision my soul. I fight with a widsom that's natural to me, I suffer but soon will be whole. It's worth considering what my life mean's to me, perhaps I should gather and go. Dear sun! Please guide the way for me, alone in the sky yet you seem so complete. Your a hero of mine! You everything I wish I could be. Out from the shade and into the light, this time I won't easily burn. Discovered a secret that's wisdom to me, the sun doesn't slow...
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Here are some words to bring up the heat, express the inner most essence that lives underneath all the words all the thoughts all the bullshit and snots. Make my way to the core, fight off ignorance that's corrupted the floor of our major political and spiritual, a habitual offender of the human spirit. A materialistic porn, possessions, obsessions, confessions, all apart of a disfunctional form of the psyche of the human condition. What's a religion? It's your attention to stories, myth's th...
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I love this quote! It speaks loads of truth. Change is rarely embraced and there is always a struggle. Great quote. Only thing I would change is the once in awhile. It doesn't seem neccessary to say that. Your quote is perfect just saying "The wonderful think about social change is that, to be achieved, you have to piss people off." Thanks for the read and good luck to you. Cheers. With Respect. -Daniel M
Hmm... Vampirism huh? I'm assuming your speaking of the vampirism that means, unscrupulous exploitation, ruin, or degradation of others. Because the other meanings do not make any sense. To say you believe in the acts and practices of vampires and that is the most natural instinct doesn't make sence. I can respect your personal opinion but I don't expect many people to agree or relate to you on this matter. People are innately good, it's proven. People do horrible things out of desperation an...
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