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AGE: 17
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 06

I eat fish in the mornings so I don’t have to smell like buffalo all day.
Gee whiz, I need to take a shower.

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Poetry / Cutting the Sky
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"Can I?" you asked. It was like there was a screen of leaves Between us With the melody of rain Lingering, I said no. I didn't want to see us touch, I didn't want to see us tangled like the trees above us. So I took a knife from the drawer, Right under the counter where Happiness sat in a cup frozen, Melting a little. I took the knife and a ladder from the shed, And cut the sky until it shuddered with thunderous delight. The sky was black that day, But you were blue. The sky bled re...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / 10
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That night when the morning shined Its exposé on our personal duets, I had to tell you that I only Let you hold me because I wanted to hurt you. I gave you my cloud dusted waffles With green tea ice cream and broken dreams. Between your apple And your packet of crisps, I packed The moon. Snatched it early this morning while you slept. I kept it while you wept. I took the pill that fucked me up, and slept for days, Slept. Wept. Slept and wept While your brother made amazing pancakes For...
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Haiku/Senryu / Roots
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You are my roots Though the sun might burn my leaves I will be your shade
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Romance / Dear you, from me
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Dear you, from me. I'm infuriated. Actually I'm not Just a little paranoid I suppose. Whisper Whisper Giggle Giggle Sometimes it's hard to Concentrate when that is all you hear. I think of pouring milk over my head and telling everyone I know that I had 12 boxes of oreos today, even though I didn't. It would be like spitting in my own face. "I part my hair each morning based on what side of my face I deem more disgusting." I wish that was true. But I pulled my hair up today and c...
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Query Letter / Dear you, from me
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Dear you, from me. I'm infuriated. Actually I'm not Just a little paranoid I suppose. Whisper Whisper Giggle Giggle Sometimes it's hard to Concentrate when that is all you hear. I think of pouring milk over my head and telling everyone I know that I had 12 boxes of oreos today, even though I didn't. It would be like spitting in my own face. "I part my hair each morning based on what side of my face I deem more disgusting." I wish that was true. But I pulled my hair up today and c...
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"and turn it in a way...never had before" -- slightly confusing sentence I must admit this is a very honest "analysis" of the heart. It shows logical reasoning that is often neglected when approaching love, but still remains in touch with emotions. Well done.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Aches and pains
"when I am sat...certain thoughts." -- slightly odd sentence construction Hmmm, the mind isn't really a physical thing is it? Does it have an atomic structure? A topic that everyone can relate to. It sounds like a very honest blog. Hope your heart is feeling better soon if it isn't better yet.
Wow, that's an extremely powerful 6-worded quote. Not sure about the lack of punctuation at the end.
66.6667% Review Quality (3 Votes)
Quotes / True Love
Haha, this is great. I like these type of witty intelligent quotes. Shows the inner-geek ;D
33.3333% Review Quality (3 Votes)
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Sixteen year olds suck
I'm a sixteen year old. And yes, I suck at writing, ha. Well, I must say that "sucking" is entirely subjective. I think we sixteen year olds suck so much because our distractions favor all things overrated. And, distraction is the obstruction to the construction.
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)