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AGE: 18
LOC: Denver, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 04

I am a High School senior working on my first novel, well one I am actually trying to finish.  

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Blood Slipper; Chapter 3
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Divinity   I jumped out of Guy’s arms and landed three steps ahead. Then I ran towards the scent, he was here. I felt him; I will never forget the way he smelled, not even if I had a skunk jammed up my nose for a year. I ran into the building, not caring if the humans seen I could run inhumanly fast. Stopping to get a fresh trail on him, I realized there was none, he was gone, Just as suddenly as he had appeared. “Sis, wait up, what’s wrong?” it was more a demand...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Blood Slipper; Chapter 2
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Lucian I went into hiding hoping that it would help me forget the girl, and it worked to an extent. I have forgotten her name, and her face, but not her smell. The night flowers still bloom; there is nothing I can do about that one. Her blood still runs through my veins, and her memories still run though my head. However, I do not see her face, or hear her name. I was able to forget that much of her. because of what I did, I swore off not to drink the blood of a human and resort to the blood...
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Prologue   December 19th, 1863 Oh God what have I done? She was a girl, no older then sixteen. The seductive creature came out of the ballroom in a red dress that hugged every curve of her small fragile frame. Something in me called out to her, something wanted me to take her… the hunger, that has to be it, what else could it be? I watched her from the monument she came out of the large wooden doors, with a small group of friends. It had to be a masquerade they had just exited;...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Night By Fire; Chapter 2
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Friends and Elders Running now, not just from the bad memories, but also because she was going to be late if she didn’t. Jasmine took the short cut through her favorite place in this world, the cherry orchard. She didn’t particularly like to eat cherries but she loved the cherry blossoms in the spring. The freshmen hall was just on the other side of the orchard. Panting and out of breath, with cherry blossoms in her deep violet hair, she reached the hall and just when she gotten...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Night by Fire
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Freshman It was only the light of dawn, saffron and rose, showing through her window, not fire in the night sky. Jasmine sat up, pushing the sweat streaked violet hair from her face. She was not only tired, she was tired of being tired, of having the dreams. When she was younger she cried and screamed, but she quickly learned crying only brought the attention of the others, who where far from comforting. She had learn long ago not even to mention the dreams. Now when they came she simply end...
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Quotes / Truth
Locked
....then band together to fight against enemies that come from another planet in the hidden forms of humans with immense powers.... Instead of using a comma to transition into one sentence into this one try making it into a sencence by itself, and don't have then. try. " when hidden enemies with emmence power come from another planet, the Girls band together to bring the threat down." or something along those lines. ...“Yes. I’m leaving out the door now. Bye,”... Here tryinstead of Leaving o...
Lyrics / out of this town
Its got potiential, but i don't know about the chorus or what I think is the Chorus; they're coming, memories of all i have and if you laugh i won't blame myself theu just don't feet the other lyrics, it changes rythem, which is good in some songs but not this one.
Quotes / I’ll Believing
Its a bit bland, almost a cliche for me. i feel like i've seen it some where before.
Quotes / six word
I really nice quote, and one I can relate too.
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