ConfusedSongwriter's profile
AGE:
16
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 18
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 18
Hi, I like music
My lyrics are an assumption of 16 years of broken promises
Like my account photo? It’s Jolly Man.
I’m an “anti-popstar”
I take bits and and pieces of other peoples personalites and make my own
When it comes to writing songs, all you need is a Verse, a Chorus and a Verse(See Nirvana, H.R. Puffnstuff, Alice In Chains, and Pearl Jam for influnces)
Recently, Bob Dole told me that I was “America’s Bright And Shining Future” After he herd me play one of my songs, he told me “Don’t quit your day job, kid.”
Now read…and be confused
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Verse One We think outside the box She's not exactly what I thought Maybe she's the one for me But we think so differently Chorus Some God forsaken day We will find our way And we won't listen to no one We'll have our day in the sun Verse Two I might be in love But I doubt that Heaven above Would love me this way I hope we have our day Bridge She could be for me But I don't if she can see Thought the darkeness and fears I'll wipe away your tears And we'll block out ...
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Verse One Hold on, life is here The dark evening air Awakes my thoughts And, I stop to realize The late month's skies Is just what I've sought Pre-Chorus And I Oh, I am alive And I I will be alive Chorus And I breath in and out. Breath in and out. Verse Two Don't go, away from here Just breath in some air Take my heart with you I, I must confess Without your tenderness I'd don't know what I'd do. Bridge While I realize I...
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Verse One I walked up to the podium Listening to the panamodium And voices inside my head I think about all the ones Who always called me dumb And what should be said? Chorus You all can burn Rethink your lessons learned Kiss my ass My graduating class Bridge One I could be nicer But I'd be a liar Verse Two I would like to thank The whores and skanks For never changing To the preps and jocks Go suck a cock You'll be re-arranging...
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Verse 1 I know just where you been You were out with your girlfriends And I saw you with that guy But I really didn't cry I'll figure it out in the end But find yourself a new boyfriend Chorus Fuck it I quit Fuck it You hipocrite Verse 2 I could have said something here But I'm not really insincear I'll try not to say to much Althought your nothing but a cheater and a slut I don't want you to die And I won't ever try to cry Verse 3 I guess I'll end the song pretty soon An...
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Verse 1 Hey now, I have no friends I am, just a neverending trend I wanted you to know, just how I really felt You can't blame me, it's the cards that I've been delt Chorus I can't write anymore So close my door I can't write like I used to A-bip-bobadity do. Verse 2 Well, come on now, I know how you are You make me feel like a movie star I will figure out just how to make it If I can figure out how to fake it Bridge Talking: You know, creative flow in our society is lack...
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I really liked this one. I mean not only did you write something awesome, but you also really touched on something that happens a lot more than people like to admit. They don't really like to talk about their first true love, which you did here. My favorite line was the very last line, the "extra something" kind of way. That is some this I really found enjoyable. I hope you continue to write.
This made me smile a bit. I liked the "Wake up, it's my dumbass calling again line" that was pretty catchy. On the other hand, using "dumbass" too much in a song might not get you in the top 40.(Although, if you read some of my stuff, I need to start following my own advice...) I liked the "heart of myself" sequence. I'm assuming that it's the bridge, it's well written. Flow of the song was OK, but needs just a little bit of work If you work on it a little bit more, I bet that this song would...
I totally agree. People are WAY to artificial in life today. That I think is what the quote pretty much says. I totally agree with how people can transform themselves when a camera is on...For example "I feel so depressed" "Let's take pictures!" "OH GOODIE, Where's my makeup?" Exactly how society is functioning today. We all should just destroy our cameras and remember whats on the inside and not out. Great quote.
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