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LOC: Friendswood, TX
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LAST LOGIN: October 07
LOC: Friendswood, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 07
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Where is the nothingness when we feel that we need it the most? The vacation we long for is not a small piece of life away from the job or the kids or even the "other", it's from life itself. Or consciousness. We see the snot-nosed toddler staring at life and death - standing on the porch of a tagger's canvas filled with the half-dead who dream of living while creating their own purgatory. We realize that in the house myth and fiction have become fact and truth and the in the stained corners ...
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One year ago today I 'WOO'd you. Little did I know... The dreams that I had set aside... The hopes that were all but lost... And you replied. We became friends, then good friends, then best friends. Until you came. I saw your face... I touched your skin... I held your hand... And we were one. My hopes were found... My dreams reborn... My heart set free... And, yes, I will woo you every day... every moment... from now on.
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Where is the nothingness when we feel that we need it the most? The vacation we long for is not a small piece of life away from the job or the kids or even the "other", it' from life itself. Or consciousness. We see the snot-nosed toddler staring at life and death - standing on the porch of a tagger's canvas filled with the half-dead who dream of living while creating their own purgatory. We realize that in the house myth and fiction have become fact and truth and the in the stained corners a...
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Although I like some of your metaphors, this reads to me much like: "On one day in the middle of the night "Two dead boys came out to fight..." I can understand the use of opposing metaphors when they ultimately illuminate the subject or feeling, but this just wasn't clear. To make sure it wasn't my mood or lack of concentration, I slowed down and read it over more deliberately. Some things were a little clearer, but others not clear at all. "... watching this open sore blossom." followed by ...
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