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”Listen,” I tell Raymond, ”If we wanna be rich and famous, we gotta upgrade this business. One bottle once every weekend just doesn’t do it for me. Will you get the door here?” I push the Labrador inside the radiation room. Raymond sets the timer and pushes a white button on a big panel. “You know, Raymond, I didn’t become a radiologist just to stuff test animals into a huge microwave, and neither did you. We get this wine thing going? Fame and fortune, my little friend.” “Fame?” says Raymond...
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Yeah, you could write dialogue for the Myst-games. It's a very bold thing to start out saying that the mortal tongue in which you are writing is insufficient to get your piont across; you kind of elevate yourself as a narrator, but if you're infallible asa writer, you might pull it off.
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Yeah, you got it going. Keep the good work up, and thanks for the tip.
Sounds like you live in a nice place. You can write, but I find some of the material to be a little sugarcoated, like it lacks an edge, know what I mean?
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