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AGE:
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LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 10
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 10
My name is Chloé and I write stuff =]. I love fantasy because for me, reading is all about escaping, so it’s kind of the same thing with writing. I love my life and all the opportunities that I’ve been given, it gives me a broad view point on the world. I chat too much, so don’t be afraid to strike up a conversation, I like getting to know people, it’s fun.
Chloé x
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Scatter my ashes from the highest building, And know that the Earth you walk on is alive with a part of me. The wind that touches your face is me caressing your tears, And the breeze that wraps its slender arms around your waist is blessed with my soul. For it is rough times when young minds are warped with the world’s cruel destruction, When young minds learn the world is not as innocent as it made itself out to be. Let salt drench your cheek bones which I so much admired, Feel the pa...
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Before the world had even begun there was darkness. A blanket held down by the weight of the millions of floating stars. Little glints of light that shone with pride and content every moment throughout time, even until this very day, their beauty overwhelms the least vulnerable part of our minds with wonder and amazement. There was no time, words, life or anything that makes our world so amazing. But there was something. If it was possible for you to look in between the darkness of the univer...
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Before the world had even begun there was darkness. A blanket held down by the weight of the millions of floating stars. There was no time, words, life or anything that makes our world so amazing. But there was something. If it was possible for you to look in between the darkness of the universe and the light of the stars, you would have found her. The legend, Mother Nature. Mother Nature was: a beautiful essence, a beautiful gathering of thoughts, spending her time dancing within the confine...
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You've done it again! it's been so long before I have read anything you have written and oh how i have missed it! I can't put my finger on how you do it, you pull of such a weighty issue, and spin it so it sounds light-hearted. It is very similar to the way children's nursery rhymes have deeper meanings and lessons to learn yet they're so addictive and cheerful you learn the lesson subconsciously but then at the same time it does not have the innocent feeling about it, probably because you're...
I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'stressed to the vest' but it sounds quite cool, it gives an edgey, unorganised feel which is a side effect of stress. I like the idea of repetition in here and the dilemma over sitting and standing it allows the poem to convey the feeling of things running round in circles in your head, never ending, that sort of thing - which again is related to stress. It is very well written and linked to the theme nicely. Just for a bit of constructive criticism - "My ...
The urgency to feel like you belong is very strong in this poem. With the endless ammounts of questions and 'food for thought' engaging the reader. The scattered layout and lack what seems a lack of structure builds an idea of confusion and an idea of being lost and lonely, not quite knowing where you stand or where you belong. There is not much flow to this piece and that makes some people feel uncomfortable which I think works really well here because it is quite a blunt piece, almost despe...
haha, setting a bad example for students everywhere! But hey! If it works, it works. love it.
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It is just the perfect display of female dominance. How any woman with power is seen as a 'bitch' just because she is not interested in a man who is not up to her standard. I love the mythical expample used to convey this. It puts a whole new spin on the situation. For a 'bunch of rhyming words' it tells a wonderful story. Your use of vocabluary is quite enchanting as it ties everything together nicely without overdoing it as I have seen time and time again. I can see the effect you are tryin...
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