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AGE:
25
LOC: Dekalb, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 07
LOC: Dekalb, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 07
Hi! I’m currently writing a fantasy novel as well as a collection of short stories. I value all constructive comments, as I am seeking to improve my writing style. Thanks! <3
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Originality: novel rearrangement of hackneyed words.
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Originality: rearranging hackneyed words and notions.
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Imagination nourished by reservoirs of disquiet.
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They found him at twilight Hiding beneath the deck. They bound his hands and feet; Put a chain ’round his neck. They demanded from him Details they had to know: Questions Questions Questions On who had sent him. Oh - They forced him to answer. He would not break his vow. But, silence was something That they would not allow. They tightened his chains, yet They could not make him talk. They turned to other means: The flame, the whip, the rock. He withstood each torment And still refused to spea...
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To the one who knows my heart I send my love And kisses manifold Across the sea of stars, Across the bounds of Time. I dream of the days of youthful glory Beneath our shady tree, Your arms holding me in a perfect embrace, Your lips kissing my tears away. I know not why they took you And cast you in confusion; I know not why they tested my undying love With a parade of imposters in your guise. Through the sting of every whip And every pitiless laugh, Through the suffocating solitude, And past ...
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Wow. Well, this is definitely unique. You have made a clever and sarcastic twist on the typical "girl falls madly for boy" romantic sob story. I love how only the girl's point of view is shown; it's an effective way of exposing just how one-sided such an obsession is. I also love the second-person narrative. It puts the reader in the unaccustomed - and uncomfortable - position of being the one who does the rejecting. I also love the typesetting (or whatever the technical term for it is). Ther...
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