ChuckReina's profile

The strengths of a project like this are the emotional weight that they carry. That is why books like this can see and is why publishers are often interested in them. The problem I found with your query letter is that you seem to side step the emotion involved with the piece. Your opening sentince is stiff and doesnt communicate any real emotion. You say that you wanted to do this because of this which is because of this. Vague. Instead of saying that your sister gave you this music box, say ...