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LOC: Connellsville, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 08
LOC: Connellsville, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 08
I am 19. I want to publish a book. I love to write. Writing my story “Diary of a Love Starved Teen” has become my obsession. I am lookin for honest feedback so I can maybe one day get it published.
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Bobby arrived in Texas in a panic, his cell phone was not in his pocket, he either left it in Pennsylvania or he lost it on the plane. He went to a security guard and told him, and the guard notified an attendant on the plane. The attendant didn’t see a cell phone so he knew it was still in PA. He called Sara from a pay phone and found out it was in her car. He asked her to just shut it off, and mail it, so she would. Bobby was laying on his bed, thinking about Sara, but more thinking about h...
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The jury is out All rumors are true We could’ve been epic The story of me and you A love spanning decades Blood shed and gore Many countries all a buzz A mess of folk lore No matter what would happen Together we would be No arguments we’re not perfect But it was always you and me Noone writes song About love without any pain If things were easy Love wouldn’t be a game I wanted things to work out And I’m sorry that they didn’t But now I’ll never see you And I can’t believe how hard I’ve been h...
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Poor Sara, she knew what was coming next, a break-up. So she closed her eyes and let him talk. Bobby kept going on about how unfair it was to her, and how that if she was still single when he was done that he would find her no matter what. Sara hung the phone up and just cried. She felt like her heart had been ripped out, and she didn’t even know why. Her and Bobby had never been in the same room except the first time they ever met. She tried to call her best friends for some emotional suppor...
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Their romance was the thing that fairy tales were made of. A chance meeting, drama and confusion, full of plot twists and heartaches, but it would end with a lasting love. It starts like any other love story, but ends a little differently than most. It ends after a long lasting struggle to make their dreams of forever come true. Sara was only 16 when she met Bobby. Their first meeting was by pure chance, and it would be a day to remember for both of them. Sara and her friend Abby were bored o...
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When I first left home I was a complete disaster. I had broken up with my then live-in fiance. We were two months before our wedding and I felt trapped. I believed I couldn't go through with a wedding. I was to young and very scared of the idea of forever. The day after I called it all off I took off. I used all my savings to take a trip. I had my passport already for the honeymoon, so I took all the money I saved up for the vendors, sold my ring and dress, and took off. I had $7000 and a pas...
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