Budderflibecks's profile

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AGE: 36
LOC: Tucson, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 12

I am a middle-aged mother of two who enjoys reading and writing poetry.

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Version 1
3 Reviews   1 Comment
Clouds adorned by the beginning of a sunset observe the dancing images created by mid summer breezes. Greenery sways and brush, making breezes rhythmic welcoming the fall of night. As daytime prepares to exit, the stars take their place, to be seen adorningly by the world below. The ground knows its existence will soon be darkened so it prepares to bow downfor the purpose of the moon. It lies almost still, barely moving virtually un-controlled by the slights of wind; exerting all its effor...
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Version 2
3 Reviews   2 Comments
      Luminous exterior flawless and "un-crack able" Lukewarm blood-dipped daily into a freezing mold… Teflon façade melted within a steel pulse germinating upon weaklings and complaints of the repulsed Snake like wit- subdued animal charm Liabilities are a niche as old crimes take on new forms Self invented- giving "life" no choice By innocence fermented in the shadow of the devil's voice Glued to innovation flying above trail blazin...
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Poetry / Untitled
Version 3
4 Reviews   0 Comments
wine tongued kisses between sweet breathed conversations are candle light serenaded while, rose petal air filled scents fan senses labeling speechless interims as perfect moments… fervor seeps into frolic's simmering atmosphere and...phrases that underline body gestures delightfully entice playful tones fluttering spirits connect with irresistibility’s spiral…. encounters with delectation’s journey encourage uninhibited responses emotions are priceless and nothing could be bought nor sold to...
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Version 4
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Your word's aura released hard to remove tensions and insecurities Effortlessly you opened a door within my core which gave birth to a substance that now longs to unfold the untold Our circular continuum of boundless romantic energy is contained in exchanges of authentic and humble warmth… Easily, you level the rough edges of my spirit with your open minded honesty I drowned in your smile the very first time I saw it turned away from your eyes As I knew I would get lost in them So…everyday in...
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Version 4
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"A Circular Control Circus" by budderflibecks Overwhelmed, overpowered and overreacting over overrated actions…. Controlled by consumption and reciprocity, taking it, throwing it back Masterfully manipulating a minutia mindset All for the sake of Rhetorical rhetoric Flagrantly flagitious and full of fear It never ends A shamelessly transparent spiraling stubbornness Transcending into a tumultuous trickery tenaciously corrupt Forever-never-ending This is how clowns live In A Circular Control C...
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Short Story / Goodnight, Pretty Baby
I like the way the story begins. I was immediately drawn in because there were questions being asked in the very beginning. The sentence structure is concise, direct and clear as well. The second paragraph really hit me on a personal level…but aside from that, I found myself appreciating the manner in which you addressed the “embracing “ or rather the behavior of so many of us when we are aware of inevitable death but don’t want to accept it. You did a good job at personalizing that it in you...
Poetry / Two Ships
Personally, I liked the person feeling that I get from this write. I feel like you are sitting down with me and talking which made it that much more easier to read. Thanks for sharing this experience with us. I wouldn't anything about this write as the structure and form is perfect, in my opinion. Good job!
Poetry / Barack Obama
I like the form of this write and rhythm of it as well. It was easy for me to read but that did not take away the wisdom and heart of this write. Good job.
Overall the write is good. I would first start off by changing the form that it is in order to give your readers more access to the message that you are trying to put across. I did however enjoy the imagery created by the word usage, but again I would change the structure in order to give it a more uniformed look.
I would not change anything about this write. I am also somewhat familiar with his work and find it enjoyable and inspiring. What comes to mind for me in this poem is of course Dali's work and also the comparison between a real person and one of his paintings or even his overall style.I loved the write too...another favorite
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Short Story / Goodnight, Pretty Baby
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