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And you are the moving epitome of all this.
Of you, by you, for you.
God, is this all it is, the ricocheting down the corridor of laughter and tears?
Of self-worship and self-loathing?
Of glory and disgust?
Here I am, a bundle of past recollections and future dreams.
I am but one more drop in the great sea of matter,
defined, with the ability to realize my existence.
From: “The Unabridged Journals of Sylvia Plath.
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I like the gritty nature of it. The only criticism I have is the title; it seems like a cheap first impression of what turns out to be a very cool poem, and the line; "When I call Silence screams, violent and obscene" it comes right before my favorite line of the poem but it feels like a filler to get the poem to flow well, it feels to me to have less signifigance to this poem that all the other lines. Other than that I think its a great poem. I love the imagry, the feeling of the room. It's ...
this is intresting. It is amusing to try to figure out the roles of the characters and the relationship between them. I also know this feeling, though it's hard to put my finger on, to place it's familiarity. I think the stanzas were well placed. The mood is captivating and the lack of specific claritty allows the reader to explore there own imagination to try to understand yours.
Very well written. I like the snap shot, the feeling of the moment. The imagery was great, however I would have been a little lost without the note to the reviewer.
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