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AGE:
28
LAST LOGIN: October 18
LAST LOGIN: October 18
I’m a disillusioned 26-year-old who is tired of being kicked when down. I write to get feelings out, good and bad. I have a tendency to feel whatever emotion to extremes, and I hate writing dialogue. Scenes are my thing; the atmosphere is the most important thing to me, words among people are merely by-products and sometimes necessary.
I’m not the best writer, but I’m working hard it. I want to create my own voice, my own style; copying other people’s style isn’t my thing.
Anything else doesn’t matter much. Who I am isn’t as important as what I write.
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He tasted of danger and sin. This was the man that could curl her toes; leave her breathless, and willing to beg for more. She would drop all pretensions for a taste. She knew he was aware; used it to his advantage when it suited. She simply didn’t care; her addiction wouldn’t allow it. She would kiss and lick from head to toe with stops in between. She would use every trick, ones that made most men jelly-legged, but he seemed to be immune. Only his in the middle of the night; he was gone bef...
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I love the reaction of the nun to the friar's feverish questioning. And the Mother Superior's book is fabulous. The writing is very satirical with some kernels of truth. Who hasn't wondered what the nun wears underneath? Is it jeans, a t-shirt, and funny socks or a too long gown? The pacing is on point and I'd love to know nuns reaction after the friar is run out.
Oh, I love this. The way she leaves bits of herself, to not understand the human parts of her and how she finally did what he wanted and missed out because it all too much. Poor fragile thing. I do wonder about the origins of her glass. Is that normal? Or is she special? Does she break off her breasts in anger? There's so much to explore in this short. I love it. I'd love a series of these, or a follow up. This story felt like a modern fairy tale. I'm sorry it took me so long to get back sinc...
I loved the story, but the death sequence became muddled with the use of "she." Having two female leads means a qualifier or something similar is necessary to establish who is doing what. Perhaps something like "the lighter hair faery" to you are able to visualize the scene properly. Overall, I liked this story because the fantasy elements also hit on major human themes: death, surviving, doing what is right and sometimes the failure of success. I definitely like your Dark Queen, the almost e...
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