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A very interesting introduction, mysterious and made with good imagery. On the second page, I liked the wording since it left the reader wondering what kind of creature you were describing. Perhaps you could have elaborated on an incident where you "hurt" the humans and why you live in solitude.

I get that feeling sometimes too, but sometimes more of how to figure out how to end something. Maybe you should enter something to that effect into that 6 word memoir thing, just a thought.

Fantastic work, I've read a few of your poems and I actually like this one best, of the ones I've read. You were able to create a chaotic aura, and dramatically shift the mood of the piece. I liked the ending, the intent of the word "agony" could have been clearer in it's context.

You should spell check your material before you submit it "secrety" isn't a word. The fluency is thrown off by unnecessary words in your sentences for example "but that cuts" "but" is unnecessary. Related to that point, that sentence has other issues, "that cuts your flesh where my crimson tears are uncovered" doesn't make any sense, it should be reworded to something like it was a consequence of the cutting that you shed crimson tears (except it should flow of course). On a side note, I feel...

Very nice, although I don't understand why you'd title this art, it's a very good life question. My only answer is "more" it'll only separate you from those who are afraid to take a chance. Good job.