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AGE: 21
LOC: Westminster, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 23

I am a young inspired writer about the age of 18.  I’ve been writing for over 8 years and have never stopped nor do I plan too.   My main goal in life is to wright an autobiography.  I’ve been through quite a bit and I would love to share that with the world.  I also wish to publish a book someday.  I write everything from songs, poetry to novels.  

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Fear To Courage
Version 1
20 Reviews   1 Comment
It was ten o'clock when I pulled into the driveway to a dark house. Either no one was home or every one was asleep, though it doesn't seem like any one is home. I always hated coming home to a dark house; something about the dark really petrified me. Turning the headlights off, I put the car in park and got out the car. It didn't help living in the middle of no where with an old Victorian house that no one lived in for twenty years right next door for a neighbor. I ran to the door fumbling f...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Fear To Courage/ New Beggining
Version 2
20 Reviews   5 Comments
I glanced down at the radio just in time to watch the time turn ten o’clock sharp, my car gradually pulled onto my long disconcerting driveway. Pain pulsated through my head, my hand ran threw my hair and I glanced up at the house. It was completely dark. Everyone could be asleep, but at this hour it was more likely they’d gone out. I hated coming home like this; something about the dark really petrified me. Turning the headlights off, I put the car in park and got out. A branch broke to my ...
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Horror / Nikki the Wraith
"Sweat bled from my hands as I rubbed them nervously together" This analogy is pretty spectaculour... Sweat Bled... I would have never thought have put it that way. You also created such a desperation for this puppy, who was defensless and alone. You have really captured the reader into feeling the emotions of the characters in the story! My window was painted like a snowflake with foggy tendrils framing a crystalline surface. <--- You have such great description!! Very captivating! " Inev...
Short Story / You Can Be Lawrence
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Novel Treatments / AZURE SEES
The beggining to this review was deffinitly intriguing. You didn't exactly lead right into what the sole topic would be untill you read further. I really liked this because it kept my attention as the reader. I didn't get bored with it or loose my attention. I think your thoughts we're very nicely displayed with the mother and how her fond memories of her husband we're reflected in Lila's face and smile. It was sweet touching and even alittle sad. But keep writing I enjoyed it! Your style is ...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Stygmarsh Chapter 4
"Jim woke up, his mind foggy and his tongue feeling like it was bandaged in wool." EXCELLENT OPENING SENTENCE! Totally grabbed my attention and realed me in from there. That first sentence or first couple of sentences I find are VERY important! I assume this is the next part to the first that I read!! I'm enjoying them keep it up!
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