AstroBoyJ7's profile
AGE:
31
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 06
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 06
I’m a relatively new writer based in Canada. My influences include Japanese live action dramas, anime, manga, weird and off beat programs, (even if nobody else watched them I LIVE for weird and obscure programming,) and shows that mastered the ability to mix music and visuals like Miami Vice and CSI.
I love to travel and learning something new about a city or culture that I have never seen before is always exciting. I love music having been a disk jockey in one form or another for over 15 years. From checking out cool underground clubs in Tokyo to KISS at the MTS Centre I’m there.
My hope is to find cool and creative people who love writing and to find ways to find an audience for my work.
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SCENE 23: RICHARD AND HIS PARTNER ARRIVE! JENNIFER, MARIE AND WENDY are walking down the SIDEWALK in the late afternoon. There are trees all the way down the WALKWAY to the school. There are park benches along the SIDEWALK and people walking by them. They are discussing the missing money before they are hit on by thugs looking for some action. Here we are reintroduced to RICHARD and his partner JIMMY. WENDY is wearing a blue jean jacket and blue jeans with a black t-shirt. MARIE is wearing a ...
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SCENE 18: PANDA COVERS HIS FACE It’s just before 9:00am and PANDA is just entering the SCHOOL and passes the office where JENNIFER is just leaving to get to class. PANDA is wearing a pair of baggy black jeans with a chain attached to his wallet and a baggy white t-shirt. JENNIFER is wearing a gray track jacket with blue trim and a pair of blue jeans. She also has her hair tied in two ponytails and is wearing glasses. JENNIFER: Hey Andrew! PANDA covers up the side of his face and looks at JENN...
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SCENE 1: Jen's big day! JENNIFER CAPRICE is in a SCHOOL GYM practicing her intro to Westdale High School as one of their newest teachers. She is standing on the assembly stage in front of a podium with a microphone. She is wearing a nice suit with a skirt and modest heels. She has double ponytails in her hair and glasses on. She is excited but nervous and sometimes speaking really fast and loud as a result but gains confidence as she goes along. JENNIFER: This is my first teaching job and you...
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SCENE 1: Jen's big day! JENNIFER CAPRICE is in a SCHOOL GYM practicing her intro to Westdale High School as one of their newest teachers. She is standing on the assembly stage in front of a podium with a microphone. She is wearing a nice suit with a skirt and modest heels. She has double ponytails in her hair and glasses on. JENNIFER This is my first teaching job and you won't believe how excited I am to be here! How ya doin'? I am Jennifer Caprice! Starting today I will be teaching here at W...
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SCENE 1: DEGRASSI REFERENCES CAN BE FATAL! JENNIFER and the rest of CLASS 3-D are trying to figure out who is behind the purse snatchings in the area and how to stop them and clear ARCHIE'S name. The class are dressed in t-shirts and jeans with the odd football or hockey jersey. TOAD is wearing a WNBA New York Liberty jersey and dress pants. JENNIFER is wearing a blue track suit with the Westdale school logo on the back, a green t-shirt and white sneakers. She is also wearing glasses and doub...
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This piece isn't really my genre but I did notice some errors for you: "Walking near the tracks, she’s reminded of conveyor belt homes Occupants borrowers of three-bed, two-bath Siamese duplexes How they all chase their Motrin-for-whatever-ails-them " There were no periods or commas at the end of each line/sentence here. “Momma, I’m gonna be a fighter pilot on day.” Of course it is 'one' day. Interesting read even though the subject matter isn't really my speed.
This piece really spoke to me because I lived in a home where my parents had an extremely stormy and violent marriage as well. I really liked the symbolism and imagery in this piece. The final few lines sum up the battered wife syndrome experience in a nutshell. Excellent piece.
I'm not sure what type of poem this was supposed to be but you never deviated from the structure you used for it. I liked the imagery that you used here and really enjoyed this piece!
This almost reads like something Jhonen Vasquez would write. Some creepy/goth drawings would accompany this piece very well! Nice piece.
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