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I write because I need you Need me Trying to free my soul If only for a moment to escape reality Seeking peace in a world blinded by materialism, false ideals, and poverty. Trapped in a state of fear. Wars according to race, turf, and a seemingly endless struggle for power. One man's fear manifests into another's last hour. And still left without resolution Increasing confusion, suffering, and pain. Nameless victims, victimless names But we're all to blame No one to take a stand because they ...
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I write because I need you Need me Trying to free my soul If only for a moment to escape reality Seeking peace in a world blinded by materialism, false ideals, and poverty. Trapped in a state of fear. Wars according to race, turf, and a seemingly endless struggle for power. One man's fear manifests into another's last hour. And still left without resolution Increasing confusion, suffering, and pain. Nameless victims, victimless names But we're all to blame No one to take a stand because they ...
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I fell hard. Again. Pushing myself to pick up the pieces I wish I didn't like you so much I'm not foolish enough to convince myself it's love But maybe I'm naive for not seeing this for what it really is Questioning myself...was I too easy? I'm almost sure that's it. Like overnight things changed But from what? You might be busy Tied up Hmm... that's a thought I guess I just miss your company Talking to you. Wondering if I did something. My insecurity wondering is it someone else You won't ev...
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wide open i finally understand the meaning Crazy Over You, So Gone, Sitting Up In My Room, singing Another Sad Love Song. so this is what the old folks talk about... when the jonses come down Fallin head over heels Lost In Love my thoughts of what we could be Speechless, remembering the times we... my burning heart craving everything about you it seems i've been blessed to find what i've been searching for can't call it love but I'm So Into You, Caught Up In The Rapture, and at this point No ...
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I didn't understand the poem, however that doesn't mean it's not a good piece. Each reader has a different perception. I encourage you to keep writing.
I thought this was a decent piece. I think we've all been there before with someone we love. Keep writing, you have great potential.
There wasn't enough for me to critique. Putting my personal feelings aside in the wake of VA Tech and other senseless killings, I encourage you to continue the story and see where this goes.
I thought this was a great piece. It had a few typos, but they weren't enough to knock down points. I loved the irony in the father having a fear of clowns yet purchasing a two-seater and subsequently packing his children into the car like them. I could help nimagining what would have happened in the event of a rear-end collision... tragic.
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