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LOC: Cheyenne, WY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 06
LOC: Cheyenne, WY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 06
Hi. Do you remember all those poems and sayings attributed to “Anonymous”? Yeah, nuff said.
A career as a writer would be nice… sit around and think all day, crank out a few poems, work on that new novel… that would be great.
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-Pixels- We are all only pixels in the picture of the earth; when combined we all define the image of her mirth. Pixels in a picture, lines drawn on a page, words that shape a story, all in their final stage The earth is just the first draft, carved with finite grace-- the image is a rough sketch of the human race. As people we are static-- on a world-wide screen-- pixels flashing on and off, not knowing if they're seen.
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I am Anonymous. I hereby claim all that is mine. All of you who think they can remain unknown by signing my name in their stead, beware! I now officially take credit for all you have written... and what are you going to do about it? Yes, I take the blame for all those dirty little secrets posted on the internet. But I especially take responsibility for all writing that has been widely acclaimed by those who have the authority to do so. I embody all those too scared to step forward and claim ...
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Reaching, Searching, Yearning, Burning... At Last!
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Cat Hair, Cat Hair It's everywhere! Clinging to my shirts and pants, It floats in air to twist and dance. Coating all their favorite spots, On the sofa, lots and lots! On the dryer, in my bed, In the sock drawer, on my head! It clogs the shower, blocks my nose, Colored carpets on my clothes! And when I think that it's enough, I find another ball of fluff! Searching, searching for my cat, I finally find my baseball bat. It was hidden under fuzz Just like my old game-boy was. Cat Hair, Cat Hair...
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His Heart They weighed and monster Ate To ever after seal his Fate His labored Trust His Lover's Lust Love like air Raw and Bare Write he does on matters Grave Love he not the Lover's Slave Imprisoned there In beggars Fare The image of A labored Love The Lover does not love him though She must have put on quite a show So there she be for Eternity With him she Hate What twist of Fate! But love they will for I see All In the depths of My Crystal Ball
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This piece lost me right at the start. How can something look so steel? Steel is not an adjective in that sense. Steel is a metal. Things can be steel colored but they cannot be "so steel". The second line made no sense to me either. Why are bronze leaves twisting in-between what? And what is "it" in the third line? I can understand prison post standing like guards but what is in prison? Why is what feeling such a desirable thing? Emptiness on the other side is fairly basic kenning, I take it...
Very good work. The poem reads easily and smoothly. The opening statements are very intuitive. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by "Alchemy", though. To me, alchemy is a pseudo-science that involves mixing random things together in hope of turning lead to gold or making a potion for everlasting life. The tone of the poem seems to be that of hope and other forward-thinking things, without being unrealistically optimistic. The last stanza is very well put together. It drives home all the feel...
It's an interesting poem in that there is a dark tone to it. There are hints here and there of a larger scheme; namely, the mention of the Mourners. Technically: the poem is well punctuated. Rhythm seemed rather lax though. In line 3, "against hope" could be left out... though it would slightly change the tone. The fifth line of the third stanza (line 13) really hurts to say out loud. I'm sure there's a better way to write that stanza so that it flows better. Stanza 5 incorporated the 5th lin...
I can't decide if this crimson life is a good thing or a bad thing. The red seems to progress from violence and anger toward a more constructive energy. The technical aspects of the poem appear to be sound, though the last two lines did throw me off at first.
Well i really don't know what to think of this poem.... and i don't know if i want to talk about it considering that the poem states that my review will not be read. .... but on the off chance that the poem is just a poem and the author actually intends to read a few of these... i'll say a little bit about it. an invisible poem this certainly is considering that there seems to be more of an idea here than is stated. the last line, "sometimes unheard words are best" hints at another, deeper co...
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