Really heavy going.i really like it though.There is alot of pretentious crap out there about war but this is more of a reflection and as reflections on serious subjects like this go its brilliant.

I like the tone of this though it lacks structure and doesn't really flow but I hate structure anyway cos it makes poetry predictable so i'm gona give this a 9 and a lil' sad face = (, cos its sad and serious and I for one LOVE it

I love this whole structured yet unstructured thing thats going on here.The poem itself is unreal, brilliant use of the word euphoria I personally take the meaning to be the plastic like ignorance of about 70% of the worlds population.All i all its amazing. oh but I think you mite have meant to say losses in line three since loses doesn't make any sense..= )

ammm....not sure what to say, its good but i don't really get it.I think it could use a bit more length because i found that just as i began to get into the poem it eneded.Besides that i like it and its comes across as really intelligent poetry

This should definately be published!! Its amazing! The only actual critique i have is that the first line doesn't exactly demand my attention and doesn't really give me much incentive to read on, otherwise its brilliant though!

I really like this piece.The only critique i can give is that you could try being slightly more consistent with your capitals but as this is poetry that isn't particularly important. Overall a beautiful piece that definately deserves to be published.

I really like how this poem has me asking questions until the very last line when it ties everything together perfectly, it is a really cleverly put togrther poem. The subject matter quite reputable and your lanusge is fantastic. I have no actual critique just a well done..= )

What can i say..Awww!! this is so sweet! i love it! you have serious talent and this should definately be published. No criticism cause this is perfect!

I'm not quite sure what your trying to get at here. You obviously need alot more practice but the structure and rhyming scheme do work well