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LOC: Cullowhee, NC
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The red-and-black backed cards were arranged in a column and in a semi-circle on the round red oak table. Nothing else was visible in the room save for three purple candles that gave off a dim light above the table. Slowly with practiced precise movements, feminine hands reached out over the cards and flipped over the card on the bottom of the column. They did the same for a middle card in the semi-circle. The first card flipped over depicted a yellow smiley face, the second card showed a but...
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Torrents of rain smashed against the long glass window of the 24-hour ‘Fast-Mart’ creating an echoing noise that was both soothing and unbearable. It was another of those early morning May rain storms. The kind of storms that were never on the news and no one ever knew about unless they happen to be out at four in the morning when it happened. By the time people started getting up, around seven or so, the hot dawn sun would’ve already dried up the puddles to a point that the average person wo...
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Excellent imagery in this one (as far as the island etc is concerned). You have a way with your characters as well, giving them their own voice in dialouge, letting it flow out naturally rather then printing it out robotically. I appreciate that kind of thing when I read short stories. The repeated "Its a small island" line made me smile a bit, you worked it in quite well. The whole story just has a fantastic smooth flow to it.
Interesting perpective, even if it didn't turn out the way you wanted. I liked this story. The 'life-flashing-before-your-eyes' sort event was well done and put in the context of telling the person who had hit him...something that I, at least, have never seen done before. I liked at the end when the man confesses to have lied about thinking he was okay. Its something I'm sure everyone has done at one point, and to "confess" to such a thing is rather intriguing. Well done, my friend.
Interesting little memoir here. Rather depressing, but that seems to be the point, doesn't it? Going from the invincible child to the doubting one is a rather tramatic transformation that everyone goes through at least once in their childhood. This is a great example of such a transformation. Very cool.
You normally don't see stories about divorce trials from the lawyer's perpective it. It was quite refreshing, if not any more 'joyful'. Of course its fairly difficult to put joyful and divorce in the same category any way you spin it. As I've said to dozens of other people, I'm a sucker for different characters. Well, the little quirks that those characters can have anyway. Bob definitely struck me a realistic guy and that is always a good thing.
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