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AGE: 21
LOC: Hamilton, MT
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 05

Hmm…POETRY is my main goal in life. Too one day write a book, and one day maybe help somone one through their tough situation.
Poetry has led me through so much shit. I don’t know what it is about words but they are a healer. I first started writing my froshmen year in highschool, all because of my talented and crazy teacher. She showed me its all right to write about what you want… let others ridicul and judge it, you only become a much wiser and greater writer.
  My firends are sooo imporant to me and are a key in my writings. Angela Clark thank you for showing me how to be creative!!!!  
  Another thing you should know about me- Though I may be able to write some things, I cannot spell… OMG you would think that your wrtiting…

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Can you hear my sound? Can you help me land? Can you please just listen to the words at hand? No you wont understand nor could you ever feel the feeling that has me locked in one grewsome deal. I'm not asking for a rescue, just let me fall, I'm not playing this game, this journey is to long of a haul. Rain screams it's eternity of tears, as I sit and ponder lives bountiful years. Dear Diary , my thoughts bleed down for you to read, maybe to understand this thing insided of me. Some monster ha...
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I can often feel your presence I know now it is you, daddy please come get me It's the right thing to do. I need you to take my hand, and I will fly up to the stars with you, our spirits will be together, as our feet land. I need to get away my place I know must be with you, I no longer can stay. Dear god please help me, I'm drowning and cant step up arn't you watching? Dont you see? It's my dad that I really need. I want to wrap my arms around his neck, and never let go I want to look into h...
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Poetry / In her hands
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Face engourged with the skys tears, bow my head, fall to my knees all came true this fairy tale of fears. Decending into a world of pain only I could have changed my destiny.. water seeps through steel drain Cringing at all past pain situations I could have changed, instead I just helplessly sat,I did fade. Running thin fingers through short hair, staring at the puddle; my pale reflection. Ther's no going back, it's the grace of strength I now lack. Disease has taken away life, all that I use...
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Poetry / The drug
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I still remeber the day you said herion was your friend, not I, I remeber that scared helpless feeling when I had to tell you goodbye. I tried to hold back tears, be strong because you couldnt be, Looking into your lifeless eyes, knowing in your life, no more me. I gripped tightly to the railing, as you walked down the cold cement stairs, I started yelling and preeching, and how each time you u hold a needle, my heart tares. How each time I see your face you look like someone new someone who ...
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Poetry / suns strength
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The sun reached my fingertips dove across my face, surrounded everything around me with it's lips spread grace. So lonly I did feel, sitting by the window ledge, but the sun came to my rescue as I sat on the darkend edge. All my frightning thoughts seemed to just dissapear, out of sight as i found myslef smiling, and it felt simply right. It warmed my body with intense heat brightened the most darken day with sight, the sund and all its strength stopped me from a bitter almost tragic fight.
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Journalism / 6 word memoir
thats so strong. I really like it.
Poetry / Easy To Hate
hey you! I really like this piece. I Think that you should go on with your feelings a little more. Like get into depth of how your heart is feeling and how he made you feel... i really like this tho!
i will go buy it!
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Fleshy Prison
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the rythm is awesome. tittle is perfect.