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AGE: 21
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 03

hello. im richard. i hope you enjoy my poetry and lyrics.

my goal is to explore the areas of the mind. If you think one of my pieces doesnt really make sense, i made it that way on purpose. Its to make the reader think instead of just making them absorb what you have to say. If you have any questions write me. im nice so add me.

enjoy my work on myspace!

www.myspace.com/dickinjustice

CHECK OUT MY MUSIC PAGE!!!

www.myspace.com/ourburiedsun

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at last love has failed me you have failed me dispise this false idol cryptic words, falsify and damning the words of this whore beware, beware of her forked tongue and venom lips beware, beware of her touch! Our goddess has turned her back on me she was hope in mystery my faith, oh so fake victim, i fell to this sirens call high pitched notes and preaching words of her faith, i should have known. I distent myself from a harlots moon for she will never bring the sun one that she helped bury! ...
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Lyrics / aeons of epoch
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in a field of lifeless flowers Abel dances in the rain near the blackend ship of broken dreams under the bridge, the sunset calls to me does it hurt to inhail,with all thorns in your side dear abel, your mother abandonded us near a distilled sea If the steady tide will bring shallow light then let it shine! If mirror skin cracks under shards of teeth then let it shine! If anchored feet and dripping heat bring a end with tsunami sin then let it end, in time brother abel, has you've lost your w...
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introducing..lead-layden canals a quarter inch more...open two more doors gunpowder wounds from silver sores life support...opens two more doors oh, how i longed to leave this cannablism under candle-light. does your guilt eat your insides?! like the worms on my brethren... this wounded jouney bliss shall be lead, in transmigration a hair-trigger endeavor the marksman lost his will heed to his encounters bitemarks throb like skeletons and the powdered burns mark where the memory did lay i hav...
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Lyrics / aeons of epoch
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in a field of lifeless flowers Abel dances in the rain near the blackend ship of broken dreams under the bridge, the sunset calls to me does it hurt to inhail,with all thorns in your side dear abel, your mother abandonded us near a distilled sea If the steady tide will bring shallow light then let it shine! If mirror skin cracks under shards of teeth then let it shine! If anchored feet and dripping heat bring a end with tsunami sin then let it end, in time brother abel, has you've lost your w...
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when i look into your eyes,i see two black holes one for my worth and the other for my soul this is the burial of hope i knew, this day would come auricle, thy will be done call the graverobbers and make them dig up these floor boards scrape off the gold layer and get to the black core. a body washed ashore did you care that it was mine? a black hole chest shall forever vex now i think they're onto you. with accusing eyes they stare they whisper so loud. who knew keeping faith in stone couldn...
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Poetry / Food of love
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Lyrics / Paper Rose
This was a intriguing read. It was a little depressing with hints of romance, the want of freedom and the love of life which i like. I think you underestimated the phrase "paper rose" you could of done so much more with it instead of using it as a (and I'm assuming) chorus. But ultimately the biggest mistake you made on here was that the song never really went anywhere, it just stated the same emotion several time, which for the avid listener can be pretty boring. This piece has great potenti...
Short Story / The Morning Routine
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Lyrics / Heart's Illusion
These were some pretty good lyrics, I really enjoyed them. My favorite part of this would be "You deserve the best person in the world My only wish is that it could be me" i felt this part was raw and powerful. I only really had one problem with this and that would be that i couldn't really feel the rhythm through the lyrics, which honestly isn't a bad thing. Keep on writing!
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