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AGE:
20
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 13
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 13
hello. im richard. i hope you enjoy my poetry and lyrics.
my goal is to explore the areas of the mind. If you think one of my pieces doesnt really make sense, i made it that way on purpose. Its to make the reader think instead of just making them absorb what you have to say. If you have any questions write me. im nice so add me.
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at last love has failed me you have failed me dispise this false idol cryptic words, falsify and damning the words of this whore beware, beware of her forked tongue and venom lips beware, beware of her touch! Our goddess has turned her back on me she was hope in mystery my faith, oh so fake victim, i fell to this sirens call high pitched notes and preaching words of her faith, i should have known. I distent myself from a harlots moon for she will never bring the sun one that she helped bury! ...
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in a field of lifeless flowers Abel dances in the rain near the blackend ship of broken dreams under the bridge, the sunset calls to me does it hurt to inhail,with all thorns in your side dear abel, your mother abandonded us near a distilled sea If the steady tide will bring shallow light then let it shine! If mirror skin cracks under shards of teeth then let it shine! If anchored feet and dripping heat bring a end with tsunami sin then let it end, in time brother abel, has you've lost your w...
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introducing..lead-layden canals a quarter inch more...open two more doors gunpowder wounds from silver sores life support...opens two more doors oh, how i longed to leave this cannablism under candle-light. does your guilt eat your insides?! like the worms on my brethren... this wounded jouney bliss shall be lead, in transmigration a hair-trigger endeavor the marksman lost his will heed to his encounters bitemarks throb like skeletons and the powdered burns mark where the memory did lay i hav...
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in a field of lifeless flowers Abel dances in the rain near the blackend ship of broken dreams under the bridge, the sunset calls to me does it hurt to inhail,with all thorns in your side dear abel, your mother abandonded us near a distilled sea If the steady tide will bring shallow light then let it shine! If mirror skin cracks under shards of teeth then let it shine! If anchored feet and dripping heat bring a end with tsunami sin then let it end, in time brother abel, has you've lost your w...
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when i look into your eyes,i see two black holes one for my worth and the other for my soul this is the burial of hope i knew, this day would come auricle, thy will be done call the graverobbers and make them dig up these floor boards scrape off the gold layer and get to the black core. a body washed ashore did you care that it was mine? a black hole chest shall forever vex now i think they're onto you. with accusing eyes they stare they whisper so loud. who knew keeping faith in stone couldn...
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These were some pretty good lyrics, I really enjoyed them. My favorite part of this would be "You deserve the best person in the world My only wish is that it could be me" i felt this part was raw and powerful. I only really had one problem with this and that would be that i couldn't really feel the rhythm through the lyrics, which honestly isn't a bad thing. Keep on writing!
wow, what a beautiful piece of art. I must say that i loved this. My favorite part of this would be "It’s cold, so cold, but faith moves me on. What faith remains" this was just so moving to me, i thank you for that. I would love to see more of this in the future. Keep writing!
Wow, This was a very interesting piece. I have two complaints about this. One, i had a hard time telling which person you were talking about a certain points of the poem. The other would be the line "When they graze your skin, But they are in love with his ass" i felt that part was very unpoetic and frankly, a little tacky. You definitly have talent, keep at it.
Wow, this was a very interesting piece. I really liked the meaning of this, which im guessing is about loving life or at least appreciating it. My favorite part of this was "Countless breezes ruffle of hair rustle of leaves" this was so calming and i felt it got the point of or at least what i think is the point of this. Great read for sure. Keep writing!
This was a very emotional peice, and i must say that i liked it a lot. My favorite part of this was "The tears I’ve cried have completely emptied me You’re the only person I ever allowed to see" i felt it had the most impact to me. The only thing i had a problem with was the length, beyond that it was great. Cant wait to read the story!
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