AmyWalker's profile

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AGE: 22
LOC: Saint Helena
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 05

My Thoughts:


  • Don’t Think Too Much While Reading Otherwise You’ll End Up With A Headache LOL

NEVER LOOK FOR INSPIRATION, INSPIRATION FINDS YOU

I Don’t Care Too Much For Punctuation We Don’t Get On Very Well & Its Not The Masterpiece Of Writing So I Try Not To Use It Really

**My Favourite Quotes Of All Time That I Stick By Is…

“You Can Never Learn Too Much”

“Never Judge A Book By It’s Cover”

“Adventures Proves Publishable” By ValCapone

THINK LIKE A WRITER NOT A SCIENTIST*

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Poetry / After The Fire
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  In fields of fire oceans of smoke   Beneath the recycled paper burning to the ground I burn apart of me   All the once treasured memories soon to be unseen   The once felt glory burning in my eyes   The past and present feelings no longer bottled up inside   Cigarette dreams unleash the stories in me stories of the untold now upon the screen   Burning on your mind all the lingering questions   we all tend to hide  
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  To speak to or speak of is a hindrance   to wallow in pain and dance in agony   is a blessing in a gloomy disguise   What was two hearts joined as one   is now separate lives torn apart   No reason or mutual decision   just one's actions that equals anothers demise   To travel through a world with bitter endings   is a beginning to renew  
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Poetry / Gravity
Version 1
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  To hear such words from lips I can no longer recall    to feel such a magnetic embrace is now a memory   To see you only in dreams is a tease   only to have my world come crashing down   when I walk out my door and know that I won't catch you   I've missed many trains in my  life but I think   God forgot to mention that this train had a limited time contract   I vaguely remember a glimpse of your smile   or even a photographic...
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Poetry / Over The Bridge
Version 1
6 Reviews   3 Comments
Looking to the pavement, with my heart chanting in rhythm Drowning the embers you once left behind, your presence no long sings, a chorus within my mind My love no longer lives, under a shattered bridge I no longer wait for the unstable mind of a man, trapped in the desires of a boy I no longer see my heart dragging, along the green mile Instead I lead my life now with a long awaited smile, Knowing that the rest of my tomorrows, I'm free      
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Poetry / Reckless Motive
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8 Reviews   8 Comments
To be reckless, to be careless, was my key, was my motive, to success To be abstract, to be different, was a thrill right up until Thoughts came flowing through, like a pestering itch I tossed away all the words I once knew, Forgot about the memories, even the ones with you I've found a new prayer, a new story to embrace I can not tell you how sorry I am If only I saw your face This new and improved adventure of mine, has turned my life around Understand my apologies, What was, is now a passi...
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Quotes / Paper Dreams..
Very good, this quote is very different and original! I like it! Thanks for sharing I have nothing else to say but keep writing. Amy
Quotes / Life Is Short..
Either say "Life is too short" or "Life is short" to start off your quote that is, just a suggestion. I like what you've presented in this quote it's great! It's very touching and moving. I like it very much! 8 out of 10 Amy
Lyrics / Pity Whore
What sort of genre were you thinking because I can see this song as sort of like a punk rock sorta song... I like it and this is something I would definitely listen to on my mp3 player... I love the lyrics its great, very well written... This line here " don't need to tell me it will be okay" did you mean to add a "you" in this line? or is it mean't to read off the way it is because it kind of took me off-balance but other then that your song is great! Great work keep it up! Amy
This is a really good poem, different to what we usually see here on urbis.. The flow and imagery was very good. It's a simple poem but very well written and poetic... I like it for its simple words not everything has to be shakerperian like. Great work!
Quotes / Lost Soul
I can see the concept of the quote but I believe it can be better, it just doesn't feel souless... thats what I want to see and feel when I read this quote.... at the moment I don't believe what you're saying is true.. Keep writing without a doubt I can defintely see a wonderful writer