AmyWalker's profile
AGE:
22
LOC: Saint Helena
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 06
LOC: Saint Helena
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 06
My Thoughts:
- Don’t Think Too Much While Reading Otherwise You’ll End Up With A Headache LOL
NEVER LOOK FOR INSPIRATION, INSPIRATION FINDS YOU
I Don’t Care Too Much For Punctuation We Don’t Get On Very Well & Its Not The Masterpiece Of Writing So I Try Not To Use It Really
**My Favourite Quotes Of All Time That I Stick By Is…
“You Can Never Learn Too Much”
“Never Judge A Book By It’s Cover”
“Adventures Proves Publishable” By ValCapone
” THINK LIKE A WRITER NOT A SCIENTIST”*
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The moment I start fading away, you reel me in just to make me stay You give me no reason or purpose, for some reason I give you hope that you'll get your own way Time keeps the distance and you away, did it ever occur to you that this how I want us Our moment in time has passed it's opportunity, There will never be a you and me I'm happy the way things are, So the only thing I need you to know Is that I am but a mere phase in your heart It will soon fade from it's glow Then you'll realise yo...
Version 1
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Looking to the pavement, with my heart chanting in rhythm Drowning the embers you once left behind, your presence no long sings, a chorus within my mind My love no longer lives, under a shattered bridge I no longer wait for the unstable mind of a man, trapped in the desires of a boy I no longer see my heart dragging, along the green mile Instead I lead my life now with a long awaited smile, Knowing that the rest of my tomorrows, I'm free
Version 1
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Roaming the streets without a care in the world, adjusting my seat to keep up with the speed Fiddling around with pallets of emotions, Guns at arms length do I shoot or do I run Police turn up and add more beat to my drum Succeeding my task I leave as the innocent, Wiping my hands, I'm on the hunt once again
Version 1
3 Reviews
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Your presence no longer sings a chorus within my mind, but subtle resemblance of how we were.
Version 1
4 Reviews
3 Comments
Think like a writer, not a scientist
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Alright this is not bad but I have afew things to mention first up the ending why did you end with "Fresh as I was I loved him" twice? I think once is enough unless there is some sort of significance as to why you mentioned it twice I'm not really fond of how you ended this peom but oh well this is just my opinion of course. Don't get me wrong I can see what you're trying to say just vaguely enough to gain some sort of understanding there are afew lines within this piece that I think is just ...
I think with abit more work and statistics to help support your speech you can put this into the journalism category it has the truth that no one wants to hear they're either too ignorant or they choose not to understand... especially ones that are of that nature... you know like for instance in Egypt it is very common, also in China they too also do those sort of things but many people don't know because not only is it illegal but it is kept secret from the world. I do research myself journa...
Wow!!! I can definitely say I have never read anything like this before, I was honestly just going to skip this story and find something else but I'm glad I didn't because I enjoyed this story so much. I was so into the story that I had my eyes glued to the screen, I felt my heart skip a beat when Beverley opened the door to find her Richie there after so many years of not seeing him... I loved the suspense from it all, the plot and the characters this was definitely well worth the read and I...
To me personally I'm not really fond of this genre as I would say the sci-fi section, but I can honestly say that I might be converted to this side of writing because I found your to be novel very interesting I was hooked as soon as I read the first few lines... For me the introduction is very important when it comes to reading anything really because thats what grabs a readers attention and I found the plot to be surprisingly interesting and facinating at the sametime and the characters are ...
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