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AGE:
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LOC: Columbia, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 01
LOC: Columbia, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 01
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Hello,
I am Amber Michelle, and I have been writing for most of my life, but only have started working on actually becoming a writer over the past four years or so. I am also an artist and a webdesigner, and I am currently studying cosmetology so that I can stop being a STARVING artist and move into the more “being able to eat and live” artist.
I’m a wife and mother of two beautiful children, and my life revolves mostly around them, but when I get the chance I work on my writing in hope to reach my goal of being published at the very least, before I reach 30 years old. I’ve …
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I shouldn't think of this, I shouldn't pull my heart Your face implanted in my brain Seeping through my serenity. I cannot hold you, I cannot touch your skin I can only wonder What those tender lips would taste like. Sweet soft smile, Tender ocean-blue eyes That feed me forbidden thoughts In the silence of unspoken words. I question my own mind Can I withstand you? Can I resist the pull upon my heart To pull you ever closer... I must... Must I?... Do you torment me without knowing How much yo...
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Searching through forever Fighting for the unsaid word I long for you. Taste the immortality As I drink your forbidden drink Your living essence. I breathe in insence and lust I feel your heartbeat slow As you give yourself to me. Take in everlastingness Feel the night linger As I lead you to the Darkness.
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I trace my way through the darkened path And fight my way through this endless life I head towards my Immortal Crystal My heart is frozen in it's depths. The Crystal is what keeps me alive But it keeps my frozen heart from me Love does not flow from its frozen depths My Love is trapped in a heart with no beat. I watch the Crystal, looking for its flaws As I can see it is flawless. There is no way to break it and retrieve my heart. There is no way to take it and bring back my love. I cannot br...
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A pink long flipper tail swims amidst the sea of awful olive green tile, white porcelain and soap scum. I really should clean this tub; it’s getting to a point of being so slippery I’ve almost fallen down twice in it. Blame it on the children and their “But I need MORE soap, Mommy!” attitude. They managed to get a hold of all of the Axe body wash last time… The house smelled overwhelmingly like my husband for over three days. Which isn’t a bad thing… in small doses. But this was like sticking...
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The wind blew lightly through the trees and stirred the pollen from the branches. Children played in the nearby sprinkler to stay cool in the hot midday summer sun, and rejoiced in the breeze that cooled the droplets of water that clung to their skin. It pulled a sun-dried petal from its stem and carried it gently in the breeze. The rose drooped on its perch, withering in its old age from the plant that had given it life. The Spring had been long, and had given the lightly scented red rose a...
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I am very impressed by this poem. At first I was afraid that the "my love"s were going to become way too repetitive, but after I read through the whole thing I actually kind of appreciated the flow that they brought to the piece. The rhymescheme was well thought out, the flow and rhythm followed through and just really brought this piece together. Well done. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
It kind of seemed as though you were grasping at straws for a rhymescheme. Overall, the thought and idea behind this poem was good, but some of the wording seems forced, and doesn't seem to flow as well as it should. Of course, personally when it comes to poems dealing with the heart I tend to lean more towards free-verse poetry, where your emotions can run with the "story" line and you're not so confined to find words that sound the same. but for a rhyming poem it was decent, but as i said b...
I Agree completely. and its sad that it is so true. But also it isn't just society, but what society is doing to our food to make everything "Bigger and Better". our diet has changed in the past 100 years and there's nothing we can do about it because they put pesticides and hormones in everything we eat, and it's screwing us all over. But i'm with you bud... I'm with you.
IT's a very colorful story that's for sure. There are still a few typos here and there, like missing an apostrophy on a word and such, but for a children's story it's written quite well, with the amusing rhymescheme and colorful imagry. Even without the pictures it painted the story quite well in my mind. However, I do wonder if the story isn't a bit long winded. Of course that can be viewed as a good thing for those children who are bound and determined to hear a short story five or six time...
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Very cute. I love the last quatrain, it made me laugh. However, if I may say so, The pauses you cause with the "with"s and the "and" where they are spaced onto their own lines cause a little too much pause, at least in my mind. they somewhat halted the flow of the melody of your words. Other than that though I found the poem enticing and pleasing. Well done.
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