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Come with me Past the cities Fluorescent lights shining Glowing brightly blurring colors As we disappear into Night’s natural beauty We can let the stars guide us Through the darkness I’ll follow your lead Wherever it may lead us If I’m with you We’ll never be lost Let’s just take off and go Without a destination I’m ready to travel this road Wherever it goes Home can be wherever we are So leave everything behind And all the opinions, misconceptions And pre-conceived notions Will drown in the...
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Conundrum The fact of you is more intoxicating than the fiction Standing in your all encompassing presence Waiting for your attention Until your essence washes over me Leaving me a little lightheaded With my cheeks hot and my hands trembling The words I want to say catch in my throat Drowning me in a sea of unspoken thoughts Every time our eyes meet But I stay near you Breathing in your truth Swallowing you into my soul Capturing a piece of you to cling to For when I am not near you Because n...
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I liked your poem. I think you made excellent use of imagery. If you're trying to say that the world is forcing us to become more and more secluded in our own little worlds, you got that across very clearly. It gets a little lost near the end or maybe I just got a little confused.
Great imagery of a woman and the pie and what goes on in the body when we eat emotionally. I could see the chemical reaction in your description.
Wow, great work. I love how you illustrate that the main characters life will be awful without the other person. This poem is short an extremely to the point. I like that. It doesn't drown under the weight of a heavy subject.
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